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ZY[ZY]
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 发表于: 星期四 五月 24, 2007 3:28 pm 发表主题: A little verse on translation—to my toiling compatriots |
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As I walked hands-tied up and down
Dipping my head into deep water dark and brown
My sense of direction quickly was drown
In a misty night with frozen ground
And a poem that I tried to translate, ever tightly wound,
Got stuck, with my day dried and cut, in the forsaken lost and found.
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Lake[Lake]
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| 发表于: 星期四 五月 24, 2007 7:34 pm 发表主题: |
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With my empathy. I felt a toiling heart with these words: down, brown, drown, ground, wound, found. They sound really heavy to me. True, translation can be bitter sometimes but can also leave you a sweet aftertaste.
You are doing good, ZY.
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| 发表于: 星期五 五月 25, 2007 10:18 am 发表主题: |
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Lake,
I really wrote this for fun--running off your little discussion with Bo-Yi on lost-and-found in translation.
I am more convinced than ever that translation is such a serious responsibility. I mean, it is one thing to mess up one's own work, and quite another someone else's.
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anna[星子安娜]
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| 发表于: 星期五 五月 25, 2007 12:01 pm 发表主题: |
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Translation is such a serious responsibility especially when the author don't know the language, because they lack the capability of judge or comments.
保守的做法，很多人是字译，不过诗意少了很多，语意也可能不完整。
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Lake[Lake]
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| 发表于: 星期五 五月 25, 2007 12:23 pm 发表主题: |
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| ZY 写到: | Lake,
I really wrote this for fun--running off your little discussion with Bo-Yi on lost-and-found in translation.
I am more convinced than ever that translation is such a serious responsibility. I mean, it is one thing to mess up one's own work, and quite another someone else's.
Cheers.
ZY |
ZY,
I saw it, I mean, "lost and found" in your poem. But I feel the order is switched in translation as "found and lost", can it be "found and kept'? Anyway, the "found" ( here I mean the thorough understanding of the text) allows the translator more freedom and creativity in translation. My two cents only.
Another nod from me for your "translation is such a serious responsibility" and "it is one thing to mess up one's own work, and quite another someone else's". That's why most of the time I only share my interpretaion (sometimes may not be correct) but not tell what the translation should be. Don't want to mess up 
Enjoy translating,
Lake
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