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发表于: 星期四 十月 12, 2006 2:19 pm 发表主题: Quick Guidelines for a Poetry Critique (ZT) |
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Find the good points first
Compliment the poet on things about the poem that you like. If you're
taking creative writing, remember your fellow classmates aren't writing
finished poems -- they're drafts submitted to the workshop to get ideas
for revision.
Find the meaning
Be candid about any image or line you don't understand or find unclear.
Point out obvious errors in spelling, punctuation or grammar. Say what
you feel is happening in the poem.
Offer suggestions for revision
Where might the poet cut a line or word without losing the integrity of
the poem? Which ideas or images may need expansion or compression in
order to better focus the poem's meaning?
Revising (or evaluating) poetry
Here are some questions you can ask yourself (or others in your
workshop), to give you ideas for revising a poem. They're also good
benchmarks for evaluating the poetry you read elsewhere.
If the form or syntax is unusual, is it for a good purpose?
Should you rearrange the order? Are there any clichés?
Are the images fresh instead of predictable?
Does it go far enough? How does it sound to you when you read it aloud?
Good advice from a mixed-media Web poet
World Wide Web-based poet Christy Sheffield Sanford's
(http://www.purplefrog.com/~christy/red-mona/) advice:
"I have a suggestion for workshops in general and that is to
use the Edward de Bono (a mathematician and educator) method
of criticism:
1) Say what you like about the work
2) Ask clarifying questions
3) Tell how you think the work could be improved.
This simple guideline is idealistic, but it's good for
encouraging a constructive attitude and it's good when
the criticism veers toward the killer mode or the
frivolous mode." |
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kokho[晓辉] kokho作品集 三品按察使 (天,你是斑竹吧?)
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发表于: 星期四 十一月 02, 2006 11:25 am 发表主题: |
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Good approach )
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不清[不清] 不清作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
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Lake[Lake] Lake作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
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发表于: 星期六 十一月 18, 2006 10:04 am 发表主题: |
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UP! |
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Lake[Lake] Lake作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
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发表于: 星期六 十一月 18, 2006 11:55 am 发表主题: |
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And out of courtesy, please take the time commenting on other's works when you post one of yours. |
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星子[ANNA] 星子作品集 酷我!I made it!
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发表于: 星期六 十一月 18, 2006 12:44 pm 发表主题: |
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And out of courtesy, please take the time commenting on other's works when you post one of yours.
---some people only comment on his own...
haha...
Lake, you are so courtesy, if others are like you, the world is better. _________________
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Lake[Lake] Lake作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
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发表于: 星期日 十一月 19, 2006 9:10 am 发表主题: |
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星子 写到: | And out of courtesy, please take the time commenting on other's works when you post one of yours.
---some people only comment on his own...
haha...
Lake, you are so courtesy, if others are like you, the world is better. |
You are much more courteous and productive than I am. |
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