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robarts[robarts]
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六品通判
（官儿做大了，保持廉洁哦）
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 发表于: 星期四 三月 27, 2008 12:21 pm 发表主题: Snow Haiku |
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Since Adam met Eve,
The dead alone enjoy peace.
Life is thawing snow.
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星子[ANNA]
星子作品集
酷我！I made it！
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| 发表于: 星期四 三月 27, 2008 1:02 pm 发表主题: |
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Hi Robart,
Good try.
看江南雪景有感
Snow
The silent night sets
a white quilt slip into fields
blesses a new day
(2)
dandelions settle
with a vow of peaceful world
beckon white snow's dream
(Published in "Verse Afire" in 2007)
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clair[clair]
clair作品集
七品按察司
（我开始管这里的事儿了）
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| 发表于: 星期四 三月 27, 2008 3:21 pm 发表主题: Re: Snow Haiku |
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| robarts 写到: | Since Adam met Eve,
The dead alone enjoy peace.
Life is thawing snow. |
Struck in muggy sluggish, inert, dreay married life?
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anna[星子安娜]
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| 发表于: 星期四 三月 27, 2008 3:41 pm 发表主题: |
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Hi Robart,
A haiku traditionally contains a kigo (season word) representative of the season in which the poem is set, or a reference to the natural world.
Senryu is a similar poetry form that emphasizes irony, satire, humor, and human foibles instead of seasons.
I guess yours should be Senryu.
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ericcoliu[ericcoliu]
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二品总督
（刚入二品，小心做人）
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来自: GTA, Canada
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| 发表于: 星期四 三月 27, 2008 10:43 pm 发表主题: Re: Snow Haiku |
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| robarts 写到: |
Since Adam met Eve,
The dead alone enjoy peace.
Life is thawing snow. |
Or you could say, in the biblical sense,
Since Adam made Eve,
The dead alone enjoy peace.
Life is thawing snow.
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fanfan[FFFFFF]
fanfan作品集
四品府丞
（封疆大吏也！）
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来自: Canada
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| 发表于: 星期五 三月 28, 2008 12:57 pm 发表主题: Re: Snow Haiku |
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| robarts 写到: | Since Adam met Eve,
The dead alone enjoy peace.
Life is thawing snow. |
I like this image.
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dundas[dundas]
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五品知州
（再努力一把就是四品大员了！）
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| 发表于: 星期日 三月 30, 2008 12:32 pm 发表主题: Re: Snow Haiku |
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| robarts 写到: |
Since Adam met Eve,
The dead alone enjoy peace.
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Do you imply that Adam came home to "a torrent of verbal abuse" from Eve, realizing that how peaceful it was when accompanied by God alone?
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robarts[robarts]
robarts作品集
六品通判
（官儿做大了，保持廉洁哦）
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来自: Canada
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| 发表于: 星期二 四月 08, 2008 4:32 pm 发表主题: |
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Thank all of you for your comments.
| anna 写到: |
A haiku traditionally contains a kigo (season word) representative of the season in which the poem is set, or a reference to the natural world.
Senryu is a similar poetry form that emphasizes irony, satire, humor, and human foibles instead of seasons.
I guess yours should be Senryu. |
Thank you much for your useful information regarding Senryu.
Snow Haiku is a "Western Haiku" in the Kerouacian sense, a short poem written in three lines which "must be very simple and free of all poetic trickery and make a little picture and yet be as airy and graceful as a Vivaldi Pastorella." A haiku as Western haiku use concrete images to capture a moment of insight.
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