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fanfan[FAFAFA]
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 发表于: 星期六 三月 22, 2008 7:05 pm 发表主题: Carnal Knowledge (R) |
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Carnal Knowledge (R)
gggg The following program
contains explicit sexual content
ggggggg Viewer discretion
gggggggggg is advised
ggggggggggggg THE
INDEPENDENT EDUCATION CHANNEL
ggggggggggg PRESENTS
ggggggggggggg A
ggg DEPARTMENT OF EDUCATION
ggggggggg PRODUCTION
I don’t want to see
Yet in fact, I want to see
I peep through
The gaps between my fingers
Shocked and disgusted
I have disdain for myself
This is what it looks like
This is where life comes from
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Don't imitate me;
it's as boring
as the two halves of a melon.
最后进行编辑的是 fanfan on 星期二 四月 01, 2008 8:28 am, 总计第 3 次编辑 |
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ericcoliu[ericcoliu]
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二品总督
（刚入二品，小心做人）
注册时间: 2007-05-29
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来自: GTA, Canada
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| 发表于: 星期日 三月 23, 2008 12:43 pm 发表主题: |
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This R-rated poem is a hoax, in which there is nothing about Carnal Knowledge but something about S E X knowledge.
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This is what it looks like
This is where life comes from
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Many thanks to the omnipresent, omnipotent, and omniscious Poetry Rating System.
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Time is nothing but a disquiet of the soul |
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ericcoliu[ericcoliu]
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二品总督
（刚入二品，小心做人）
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来自: GTA, Canada
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| 发表于: 星期日 三月 23, 2008 1:07 pm 发表主题: Re: Carnal Knowledge (R) |
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| fanfan 写到: |
ggggggggggg THE
INDEPENDENT EDUCATION CHANNEL
ggggggggggg PRESENTS
ggggggggggggg A
ggg DEPARTMENT OF EDUCATION
ggggggggg PRODUCTION
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This R-rated poem is a hoax, in which there is nothing about Carnal Knowledge but something about S E X knowledge.
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I'm sorry for my ignorance.
The R-rated poem is a poem about S E X education knowledge.
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Time is nothing but a disquiet of the soul |
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hahaview[hahaview]
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六品通判
（官儿做大了，保持廉洁哦）
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| 发表于: 星期一 三月 24, 2008 9:35 am 发表主题: Re: Carnal Knowledge (R) |
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I'm sorry for my ignorance.
The R-rated poem is a poem about S E X education knowledge. |
Ha! Ha! You're funny.
This is not a poem about s e x education knowledge but a poem about dirty s e x through the Puritan lens.
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I peep through
The gaps between my fingers
Shocked and disgusted
I have distain for myself
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What do we try to educate our children about s e x when the narrator was ashamed of viewing and terrified by a close-up of female genitalia.
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I came, I saw, and I conquered |
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robarts[robarts]
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六品通判
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来自: Canada
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| 发表于: 星期一 三月 24, 2008 2:10 pm 发表主题: Re: Carnal Knowledge (R) |
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Shocked and disgusted
I have distain for myself
This is what it looks like
This is where life comes from |
After reading your poem,
Shocked and disgusted
I have distain for the education system
This is what it looks like
This is where indoctrination comes from
By the way, I think the last line would be better to re-write as follows:
This is where human life comes from
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If one cannot enjoy reading a book over and over again, there is no use in reading it at all. |
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anna[星子安娜]
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| 发表于: 星期二 三月 25, 2008 8:00 pm 发表主题: |
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In fact, erotic poem is not easy to write.
It is hard to keep the balance.
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《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
<Nightlights> <Seven Nights with the Chinese Zodiac> ...
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fanfan[FAFAFA]
fanfan作品集
四品府丞
（封疆大吏也！）
注册时间: 2007-12-27
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来自: Canada
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| 发表于: 星期三 三月 26, 2008 7:51 am 发表主题: |
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| hahaview 写到: |
What do we try to educate our children about s e x when the narrator was ashamed of viewing and terrified by a close-up of female genitalia. |
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After reading your poem,
Shocked and disgusted
I have distain for the education system
This is what it looks like
This is where indoctrination comes from
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Yes, our education system is not trying to help our children think for themselves; instead it thinks for them and instils into their minds a particular way of seeing and thinking.
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Don't imitate me;
it's as boring
as the two halves of a melon. |
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fanfan[FFFFFF]
fanfan作品集
四品府丞
（封疆大吏也！）
注册时间: 2007-12-27
帖子: 353
来自: Canada
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| 发表于: 星期三 三月 26, 2008 7:56 am 发表主题: |
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| anna 写到: | In fact, erotic poem is not easy to write.
It is hard to keep the balance. |
Yes, true to some extent.
To me, the more important thing is how to get away with the inner judge and the outer censors because everybody is afraid of s e x, even the Independent Education Channel.
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Don't imitate me;
it's as boring
as the two halves of a melon. |
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