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星子[ANNA]
星子作品集
酷我！I made it！
注册时间: 2004-06-05
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来自: Toronto
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 发表于: 星期三 一月 10, 2007 2:54 pm 发表主题: Present is beyond (Revised) |
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Note: When asked to write down
what bothers them the most,
these kids hand in their papers
with one word on them: DEATH!
Piercing through their sad eyes,
not poverty, nor the future;
their bare trunk trembles…
At funeral after funeral,
Africa’s hottest sun
fails to warm them.
Life, a striving skill,
says
"PRAY!"
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最后进行编辑的是 星子 on 星期一 一月 15, 2007 6:41 pm, 总计第 2 次编辑 |
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kokho[晓辉]
kokho作品集
三品按察使
（天，你是斑竹吧？）
注册时间: 2006-10-25
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来自: Singapore
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| 发表于: 星期三 一月 10, 2007 4:49 pm 发表主题: |
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Is Anna a teacher?
Lately you have lots of poems about students...  
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乒乓、摄影、诗歌 |
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anna[星子安娜]
anna作品集
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| 发表于: 星期三 一月 10, 2007 4:54 pm 发表主题: |
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| kokho 写到: | Is Anna a teacher?
Lately you have lots of poems about students... |
This was a story I watched on a TV speech given by a man who visited Africa and was touched by the facts there.
In African school, teachers try to coach students to learn "Life Skills" for the hope of surviving from so many parents' death from AIDS.
I was touched too, so wrote this. |
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ljm001[星海]
ljm001作品集
五品知州
（再努力一把就是四品大员了！）
注册时间: 2006-01-15
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来自: 大连
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| 发表于: 星期三 一月 10, 2007 6:56 pm 发表主题: |
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PRAY
A lifelong skill
To escape
The lifelong thrill
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听坡上林涛低鸣，看崖下海浪拍岸 |
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星子[ANNA]
星子作品集
酷我！I made it！
注册时间: 2004-06-05
帖子: 13192
来自: Toronto
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| 发表于: 星期三 一月 10, 2007 10:32 pm 发表主题: |
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| ljm001 写到: | PRAY
A lifelong skill
To escape
The lifelong thrill |
true....
Thanks for understanding
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Lake[Lake]
Lake作品集
二品总督
（刚入二品，小心做人）
注册时间: 2006-10-10
帖子: 1341
来自: Sky Blue Water
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| 发表于: 星期四 一月 11, 2007 1:21 pm 发表主题: Re: Present is beyond (Revised) |
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You must hate me, 星子. 
| 引用: | | Piecing through their sad eyes, |
Not quite sure about 'Piecing' here. 'Piercing'? |
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anna[星子安娜]
anna作品集
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| 发表于: 星期四 一月 11, 2007 1:42 pm 发表主题: Re: Present is beyond (Revised) |
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| Lake 写到: | You must hate me, 星子.
| 引用: | | Piecing through their sad eyes, |
Not quite sure about 'Piecing' here. 'Piercing'? |
Lake, you are right. my Typo.
Why do I need to hate you? I never hate people who say things in the front of me.
Many thanks. |
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