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anna · Site Admin 注册时间: 2004-05-02 帖子: 7141

Today is the day you will turn to ten,
you remind us of joy and gratitude again.
Your IPad will arrive,
we stay at fallsview hotel and play.
Your buddies show up splashing,
chess, all sharing cake and making faces.
Your birthday is full of happiness and surprises,
Friends and families enjoy the special memory.

Life is full of adventures,
we have gone through ups and downs.
No matter what happened in the past,
We have witnessed your great growth.

Your teachers summarize: you are sweet and smart.
Your classmates smile with your support and kindness.
Your teams rely on your fairness and diligence.
Your own self stands up for peace and integrity.

We celebrate your birthday with joy and fun,
and thank you for being good all year long,
But I want to tell you, my dear one,
All we love is who you are,
believe in yourself and be proud and happy.

----(Dec 23/2010)
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Anna Yin

《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
<Nightlights> <Seven Nights with the Chinese Zodiac> ...

http://annapoetry.com

anna · Site Admin 注册时间: 2004-05-02 帖子: 7141

I made this for Jason

http://annayinpoetry.com/jasonBirthday10.ppsx

when download it, first save as zip file, then rename the file back to .ppsx
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Anna Yin

《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
<Nightlights> <Seven Nights with the Chinese Zodiac> ...

http://annapoetry.com

Lake · 发表于: 星期六十二月 25, 2010 4:35 pm 发表主题:

Hello,

It seems that your son is all-rounded. Best wishes!

A few typos, maybe.

星子 · 发表于: 星期日十二月 26, 2010 10:02 am 发表主题:

Hi Lake,

Merry Christmas.

Yes. it is typo.

The whole poem I am not satisfied, it is a little void. I will think it over.
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