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Lake[Lake]
Lake作品集
二品总督
（刚入二品，小心做人）
注册时间: 2006-10-10
帖子: 1341
来自: Sky Blue Water
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 发表于: 星期日 十月 12, 2008 12:57 am 发表主题: Leaves Fall Silent |
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Leaves Fall Silent
bleak as the falling leaves,
wet stanzas burn as firewood.
in the sage’s eyes
happy and unhappy are
just a state of mind. |
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ericcoliu[ericcoliu]
ericcoliu作品集
二品总督
（刚入二品，小心做人）
注册时间: 2007-05-29
帖子: 1393
来自: GTA, Canada
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| 发表于: 星期日 十月 12, 2008 7:46 pm 发表主题: Re: Leaves Fall Silent |
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Leaves Fall Silent
wet stanzas burn as firewood.
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A great line of paradox.
Hi! Lake:
I like your use of a set of paradoxical words/phrases to convey the inner meaning of the poem.
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Time is nothing but a disquiet of the soul
最后进行编辑的是 ericcoliu on 星期一 十月 13, 2008 8:54 am, 总计第 1 次编辑 |
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Champagne[Champagne]
Champagne作品集
四品府丞
（封疆大吏也！）
注册时间: 2007-09-15
帖子: 394
来自: Nowhere & Everywhere
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| 发表于: 星期一 十月 13, 2008 8:33 am 发表主题: Re: Leaves Fall Silent |
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Leaves Fall Silent
bleak as the falling leaves,
wet stanzas burn as firewood.
in the sage’s eyes
happy and unhappy are
just a state of mind. |
The concluding lines are a perfect description of the notion of "Zen mind."
I enjoyed reading your Zen-touched poem.
Good write.
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I'm Champagne,
Bottled poetry with sparkling joy.
最后进行编辑的是 Champagne on 星期三 十月 15, 2008 7:35 am, 总计第 1 次编辑 |
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Lake[Lake]
Lake作品集
二品总督
（刚入二品，小心做人）
注册时间: 2006-10-10
帖子: 1341
来自: Sky Blue Water
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| 发表于: 星期二 十月 14, 2008 8:48 pm 发表主题: |
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Eric and Champ,
Glad you both like it.
Thanks,
Lake |
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fanfan[FAFAFA]
fanfan作品集
四品府丞
（封疆大吏也！）
注册时间: 2007-12-27
帖子: 353
来自: Canada
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| 发表于: 星期三 十月 15, 2008 10:43 am 发表主题: |
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Leaves in the poem could have a dual meaning: the leaves of a plant and the sheets of paper bound in a book.
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Leaves Fall Silent
bleak as the falling leaves,
wet stanzas burn as firewood.
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Gem of a write.
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Don't imitate me;
it's as boring
as the two halves of a melon. |
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川生[川生]
川生作品集
七品按察司
（我开始管这里的事儿了）
注册时间: 2008-09-18
帖子: 72
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| 发表于: 星期五 十月 17, 2008 8:30 am 发表主题: Re: Leaves Fall Silent |
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Leaves Fall Silent
bleak as the falling leaves,
wet stanzas burn as firewood.
in the sage’s eyes
happy and unhappy are
just a state of mind. |
I get a sense of a shift in tone as the poem proceeds.
After all, we're no sages, surely including the implied narrator.
The concluding stanza reveals an attitude towards the reluctant acceptance of the sage's words of wisdom.
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Lines go off in all directions. |
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