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ericcoliu[ericcoliu]
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 发表于: 星期六 三月 29, 2008 7:40 pm 发表主题: Timespace (space poem) by Ron Savoie |
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Timespace by Ron Savoie
Area to the position of area
Extended to the never ending end
From this point we cannot descend
Future follows past the point we were last
And the present is an illusion
Hence, we who are not controlled
Will experience friction
But be free of addiction
And live every day with
Imagination and free spirits
As it was meant to be
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Time is nothing but a disquiet of the soul
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ericcoliu[ericcoliu]
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| 发表于: 星期六 三月 29, 2008 7:42 pm 发表主题: |
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Ron, my newly acquainted friend, is a novice writer who is interested in superstring theory and the ideas about the time-space continuum. The title of his poem, Timespace, is a coined word that he staples two words, time and space, together. It describes the medium through which we manifest life.
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Time is nothing but a disquiet of the soul
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| 发表于: 星期日 三月 30, 2008 12:14 pm 发表主题: Re: Spacetime (space poem) by Ron Savoie |
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Spacetime by Ron Savoie
From this point we cannot descend
Future follows past the point we were last
And the present is an illusion
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What do these lines mean?
This poem is idea-loaded kind of poem.
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My throat knew thirst before the structure
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ericcoliu[ericcoliu]
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| 发表于: 星期一 三月 31, 2008 8:25 am 发表主题: Re: Spacetime (space poem) by Ron Savoie |
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What do these lines mean?
This poem is idea-loaded kind of poem. |
Yes, it's idea-loaded.
In his view, our perception of Time is an illusion, anf Time can be visualised as a stream flowing.
The distinction between the past, present and future is only a stubbornly persistent illusion.
-- Albert Einstein
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This has interesting thoughts and truth.
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fanfan[FFFFFF]
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| 发表于: 星期二 四月 01, 2008 11:05 pm 发表主题: Re: Timespace (space poem) by Ron Savoie |
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| ericcoliu 写到: | Timespace by Ron Savoie
Hence, we who are not controlledWill experience friction
But be free of addiction
And live every day with
Imagination and free spirits
As it was meant to be |
Controlled by whom?
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Don't imitate me;
it's as boring
as the two halves of a melon. |
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| Maybe we're controlled by our perception of Time. |
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