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Champagne[Champagne] Champagne作品集 四品府丞 (封疆大吏也!)
注册时间: 2007-09-15 帖子: 394 来自: Nowhere & Everywhere
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发表于: 星期日 一月 20, 2008 8:00 am 发表主题: A Middle-Aged Man and His Car ( Short Short Story) |
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A Middle-Aged Man and His Car
This car was a mechanic's gold mine. On more than one occasion, Eric thought it might be cheaper just to pay Danny Tao a monthly fee for the repair service.
"Let me guess," said Danny as soon as he saw Eric. "It won't start?"
"I am thinking that maybe it's a problem with the battery."
"We changed the battery last August."
"So, it's not the battery."
"Could be. You can try to start it again."
As Eric put the key into the ignition, he wasn't sure what he was hoping would happen. The car was past its prime. Buying a new car, or at least a good used car, would definitely spare him a lot of trouble and might make him feel good about himself. He had read somewhere that middle-aged men liked to buy fancy sport cars as a way of recapturing their youth.
"Are you going to start it or not?"
"This is the last time," murmured Eric.
He supposed he was willing to put up with middle age, if he could have a dependable car and didn't complain every time the temperature dropped below freezing.
"Start it," Danny was yelling at Eric. _________________ I'm Champagne,
Bottled poetry with sparkling joy. |
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ericcoliu[ericcoliu] ericcoliu作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
注册时间: 2007-05-29 帖子: 1393 来自: GTA, Canada
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发表于: 星期日 一月 20, 2008 12:08 pm 发表主题: Re: A Middle-Aged Man and His Car ( Short Short Story) |
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A Middle-Aged Man and His Car
This car was a mechanic's gold mine. On more than one occasion, Eric thought it might be cheaper just to pay Danny Tao a monthly fee for the repair service.
"Let me guess," said Danny as soon as he saw Eric. "It won't start?"
"I am thinking that maybe it's a problem with the battery."
"We changed the battery last August."
"So, it's not the battery."
"Could be. You can try to start it again."
As Eric put the key into the ignition, he wasn't sure what he was hoping would happen. The car was past its prime. Buying a new car, or at least a good used car, would definitely spare him a lot of trouble and might make him feel good about himself. He had read somewhere that middle-aged men liked to buy fancy sport cars as a way of recapturing their youth.
"Are you going to start it or not?"
"This is the last time," murmured Eric.
He supposed he was willing to put up with middle age, if he could have a dependable car and didn't complain every time the temperature dropped below freezing.
"Start it," Danny was yelling at Eric. |
I should yell at you, Champagne. But, your piece is funny, giving me a good laugh.
Honestly speaking, I deeply hope that English Garden will, through our writing effort, be a communal literature garden of dialogic heterogossia.
By the way, I did give up repairing my old car and leased a new one months ago.
Yes, I would be more willing to put up with middle age, if I could have a dependable car and didn't complain every time the temperature dropped below freezing. _________________ Time is nothing but a disquiet of the soul |
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Champagne[Champagne] Champagne作品集 四品府丞 (封疆大吏也!)
注册时间: 2007-09-15 帖子: 394 来自: Nowhere & Everywhere
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发表于: 星期日 一月 20, 2008 3:43 pm 发表主题: Re: A Middle-Aged Man and His Car ( Short Short Story) |
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ericcoliu 写到: |
I should yell at you, Champagne. But, your piece is funny, giving me a good laugh.
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You read too much of you into my bite-sized, internet-speed "fiction," which is a short story about a middle-aged man and his car.
But, I'm glad you like it and you have a good laugh.
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Honestly speaking, I deeply hope that English Garden will, through our writing effort, be a communal literature garden of dialogic heterogossia.
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Yes, a communal literature garden of dialogic heterogossia. _________________ I'm Champagne,
Bottled poetry with sparkling joy. |
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ericcoliu[ericcoliu] ericcoliu作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
注册时间: 2007-05-29 帖子: 1393 来自: GTA, Canada
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发表于: 星期一 一月 21, 2008 10:53 am 发表主题: Re: A Middle-Aged Man and His Car ( Short Short Story) |
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Champagne 写到: |
You read too much of you into my bite-sized, internet-speed "fiction," which is a short story about a middle-aged man and his car.
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Yes, you're right. It's a fiction depicting a middle-aged man who had a bold dream: moving from driving an old car to a fancy sports car.
I have a dream, too: words that have changed and still are changing a nation. _________________ Time is nothing but a disquiet of the soul |
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fanfan[FAFAFA] fanfan作品集 四品府丞 (封疆大吏也!)
注册时间: 2007-12-27 帖子: 353 来自: Canada
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发表于: 星期二 一月 22, 2008 5:29 pm 发表主题: |
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You guys are really funny. Keep dreaming, dream as big as you possibly can.
Keep dreaming about buying fancy sport cars as a way of recapturing your youth. _________________ Don't imitate me;
it's as boring
as the two halves of a melon. |
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Champagne[Champagne] Champagne作品集 四品府丞 (封疆大吏也!)
注册时间: 2007-09-15 帖子: 394 来自: Nowhere & Everywhere
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发表于: 星期五 一月 25, 2008 8:48 pm 发表主题: |
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Keep dreaming about buying fancy sport cars as a way of recapturing your youth.
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This is a middle-aged man's dilemma: stay with current situation or quit to start over.
Buying a fancy sports car is the easiest and cheapest way out of his dilemma. _________________ I'm Champagne,
Bottled poetry with sparkling joy. |
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Lake[Lake] Lake作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
注册时间: 2006-10-10 帖子: 1341 来自: Sky Blue Water
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发表于: 星期一 一月 28, 2008 10:37 pm 发表主题: |
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Buying a fancy sports car is the easiest and cheapest way out of his dilemma. |
Then why it took him so long to realize it.
Is it a coincidence? I also thought this Eric was the Eric on this forum. |
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星子[ANNA] 星子作品集 酷我!I made it!
注册时间: 2004-06-05 帖子: 13192 来自: Toronto
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发表于: 星期二 一月 29, 2008 9:12 am 发表主题: |
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Hi Eric,
You know at our office we had a true story about the middle-aged Man.
He worked at home for long time and has developed middle-aged crises because of isolation,
one Saturday he tried to pick up their kids after school, when he got there, the school was empty and when he came back, his kids laughed at him because nobody went to school on Saturday.
Another thing was he forgot how to use the gear when he tried to drive.
So sometimes the stage was very crucial for somebody.
Your story here is humorous. _________________
最后进行编辑的是 星子 on 星期三 一月 30, 2008 9:19 am, 总计第 1 次编辑 |
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Champagne[Champagne] Champagne作品集 四品府丞 (封疆大吏也!)
注册时间: 2007-09-15 帖子: 394 来自: Nowhere & Everywhere
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发表于: 星期二 一月 29, 2008 9:37 pm 发表主题: |
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Thank lake, 星子 for your reading and commenting on my short short story.
A Middle-aged Man and His Car is Everyman's story.
Please, let's get rid of Eric. Too Many Erics on this forum.
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Your story here is humorous.
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Thanks. The story about your colleague is tragicomedically humorous, too. _________________ I'm Champagne,
Bottled poetry with sparkling joy. |
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