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 发表于: 星期日 七月 08, 2007 9:26 pm 发表主题: 有点疑问? |
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McGee was a very active journalist and the author of numerous books devoted to Irish and Roman Catholic history, politics and literature. In Canada, however, he is best known as a statesman and orator who ardently fostered a Canadian national spirit, giving it imaginative range and memorable phrases befitting a new northern nation. He had been in Montreal only a year when he published Canadian Ballads and Occasional Verses (1858), contributing to incipient nationalism by the means he had employed for the cause of “Young Ireland”—the writing of a people’s history in prose and in the form of the ballad. “The Artic Indian’s Faith” recognizes myths of the aborigines, and “Jacques Cartier” celebrates heroic events of the distant past.
亚麦基是一位非常活跃的新闻工作者，并且是致力于爱尔兰和天主教历史、政治和文学的多产作家。在加拿大，他最响誉的声名是作为热心促进加拿大国家精神的政治家和演说者，并赋予适用于一个全新的北方国家的想象空间和难忘的词句。他在蒙特利尔仅一年，就出版了“加拿大民谣和应時诗歌”(1858) 贡献于新浮現的民族主义，就象用散文和民谣的形式描写人的历史的同样方式贡献于“年轻爱尔兰”那样。“北极印地安人的信念”是对原居民的神话的认可，而“Jacques Cartier”是对遥远历史的英勇事件的歌颂。
对自己的以上翻译,希望大家能指正一下....
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Anna:
我的粗淺意見如下：
文學許多書的作者 => 文學的多產作家
初始民族主義 => 新浮現的民族主義
土人(是有貶意) => 原住民
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I am not good at translation.
But when I try to translate, my first step is to make sure I understand the meaning of each word and each phrase and each sentence.
One of my questions in this passage is:
what is "Occasional Verses” as you translated as "偶尔的诗歌"?
I have not read his Occasional Verses yet so I do not know what they are about. But gernerally speaking, occasional poems are poems written for a special event.
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Hi Lake, good catch.
I will ask...
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Hi! Anna:
I agree with Lake's comment on Occasional Verses, which are written for a special event.
Occasional Verses should be translated as 應時詩歌
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| ericcoliu 写到: | Hi! Anna:
I agree with Lake's comment on Occasional Verses, which are written for a special event.
Occasional Verses should be translated as 應時詩歌 |
谢谢LAKE和ERIC的及时雨,,,今晚我电话较对时,还一直再想到底如何翻? 因为对方很认真,更正了我每个标点,和大小写,斜体字...
再次修改一下...
谢谢!
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| 发表于: 星期二 七月 10, 2007 9:55 pm 发表主题: Re: 有点疑问? |
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| anna 写到: | McGee was a very active journalist and the author of numerous books devoted to Irish and Roman Catholic history, politics and literature. In Canada, however, he is best known as a statesman and orator who ardently fostered a Canadian national spirit, giving it imaginative range and memorable phrases befitting a new northern nation. He had been in Montreal only a year when he published Canadian Ballads and Occasional Verses (1858), contributing to incipient nationalism by the means he had employed for the cause of “Young Ireland”—the writing of a people’s history in prose and in the form of the ballad. “The Artic Indian’s Faith” recognizes myths of the aborigines, and “Jacques Cartier” celebrates heroic events of the distant past.
亚麦基是一位非常活跃的新闻工作者，并且是致力于爱尔兰和天主教历史、政治和文学的多产作家。在加拿大，他最响誉的声名是作为热心促进加拿大国家精神的政治家和演说者，并赋予适用于一个全新的北方国家的想象空间和难忘的词句。他在蒙特利尔仅一年，就出版了“加拿大民谣和应時诗歌”(1858) 贡献于新浮現的民族主义，就象用散文和民谣的形式描写人的历史的同样方式贡献于“年轻爱尔兰”那样。“北极印地安人的信念”是对原居民的神话的认可，而“Jacques Cartier”是对遥远历史的英勇事件的歌颂。
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Anna,
看来你是尽力了。
我的总体印象：一些中文译文句子偏长，读者读起来感觉吃力，有些喘不过气来。
英文句式和中文的不大一样，使用从句比较多；而中文较偏爱短句，并列句。
英文译成中文时，可否将一些从句单独提出来译，然后再译主句，减轻一些压力？
先说这点儿，仅供参考。 |
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