酷我-北美枫

[anna]

When stepping out of the time,
I return to a moment.
Discovering that an angel walks beside
I shield streams of tear.

She smile and say,"Dear, do not cry.
The darkness, you have come through,
I always watch over and take care."

I look upon everything and find it true.
I turn to the blessed moment
and embrace each with a new life.

Thus I say to you, my friends in loneliness,
"Don't cry. Turn and find your guardian.
have that faith."
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Anna Yin

《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
<Nightlights> <Seven Nights with the Chinese Zodiac> ...

http://annapoetry.com

[[星子安娜]]

When stepping out of the time,
I return to a moment.
Discovering that an angel walks beside
I shield streams of tear.

She smile and say,"Dear, do not cry.
The darkness, you have come through,
I always watch over and take care."

I look upon everything and find it true.
I turn to the blessed moment
and embrace each with a new life.

Thus I say to you, my friends in loneliness,
"Don't cry. Turn and find your guardian.
have that faith."
_________________
---------------------

Anna Yin

《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
<Nightlights> <Seven Nights with the Chinese Zodiac> ...

http://annapoetry.com

[Lake]

I suppose everyone has peak or low moments in his/her life.

"discovering an angel walk beside ", not sure about the tense of "walk".

"along I always watch and take care", "along" throws me off a bit.

[[Lake]]

I suppose everyone has peak or low moments in his/her life.

"discovering an angel walk beside ", not sure about the tense of "walk".

"along I always watch and take care", "along" throws me off a bit.

[anna]

Thanks Lake. In fact. I am not in low mood.

It is my friend... Her company starts to lay off and a woman in her midlife always try to make trouble.

I am reading a meditation book... so I borrow some idea from it.
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Anna Yin

《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
<Nightlights> <Seven Nights with the Chinese Zodiac> ...

http://annapoetry.com

[[星子安娜]]

Thanks Lake. In fact. I am not in low mood.

It is my friend... Her company starts to lay off and a woman in her midlife always try to make trouble.

I am reading a meditation book... so I borrow some idea from it.
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Anna Yin

《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
<Nightlights> <Seven Nights with the Chinese Zodiac> ...

http://annapoetry.com

[星子]

-----Comments from PenShell

Lotus is a good name for you! This poem is full of compassion; a wish to share the comfort of a moment.. Much appreciated..

Let me have some fun if you don't mind..


Stepping out of time, I return
to a moment, discover the angel
who walks beside me.

I shed streams of tears.

She smiles and says,"Dear, do not cry.
You have come through the darkness
and always, I watch over and care for you."

I look upon everything and find
her words are true. I turn into the blessed moment
and embrace all things with a new life.

Now I say to you, my friends in loneliness,

Don't cry. Turn and find your guardian.
Have that faith.

I'm not suggesting that you change your poem. This is the way I read it. Thank you for the opportunity to work with your words

mike


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BTW, lotus is the name PenShell gives to me. They give each person a name for fun even we already have our own pen name.
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[[ANNA]]

-----Comments from PenShell

Lotus is a good name for you! This poem is full of compassion; a wish to share the comfort of a moment.. Much appreciated..

Let me have some fun if you don't mind..


Stepping out of time, I return
to a moment, discover the angel
who walks beside me.

I shed streams of tears.

She smiles and says,"Dear, do not cry.
You have come through the darkness
and always, I watch over and care for you."

I look upon everything and find
her words are true. I turn into the blessed moment
and embrace all things with a new life.

Now I say to you, my friends in loneliness,

Don't cry. Turn and find your guardian.
Have that faith.

I'm not suggesting that you change your poem. This is the way I read it. Thank you for the opportunity to work with your words

mike


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BTW, lotus is the name PenShell gives to me. They give each person a name for fun even we already have our own pen name.
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