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Lake[Lake] Lake作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
注册时间: 2006-10-10 帖子: 1341 来自: Sky Blue Water
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发表于: 星期五 四月 20, 2007 9:12 am 发表主题: Professor ( Impromptu ) |
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Professor
I saw his face on internet
a teacher, a grandpa
a holocaust survivor
died Monday morning
on the land of freedom
I hate myself
being numbed at
death toll in Iraq
bomb threat on campus
and school rampage
Yet my heart hurt
when I read his name
that I could not even write
pronounce and remember
For this hero I cried
( A quick response poem on VA Tech incident)
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anna[星子安娜] anna作品集 Site Admin
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发表于: 星期五 四月 20, 2007 9:22 am 发表主题: |
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touching...
sad...
my only sugguestion may be work on title to make it more special. _________________ ---------------------
Anna Yin
《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
<Nightlights> <Seven Nights with the Chinese Zodiac> ...
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Lake[Lake] Lake作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
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发表于: 星期五 四月 20, 2007 11:25 am 发表主题: |
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anna 写到: | touching...
sad...
my only sugguestion may be work on title to make it more special. |
Thanks Anna for your read.
After second thought, you may be right. I will put a note in the brackets beside the title. But, personally, I think he is one of us, that's what makes him special. So I prefer an undertone here.
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