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Lake[Lake] Lake作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
注册时间: 2006-10-10 帖子: 1341 来自: Sky Blue Water
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发表于: 星期五 四月 06, 2007 1:44 pm 发表主题: April Snow |
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April Snow
As breeze caresses the sprouts, squirrels shuttle
from tree to tree, where birds' nests not icicles
are meant to hang, from a wanderer's eye
grey clouds flee, grass turns green, grabbing
the Book of I Ching, turning on the music
long neglected, tonight I roam and meditate
with snow flakes sliding on ten thousand lakes
in search of dialogues between a heart and a spirit. |
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星子[ANNA] 星子作品集 酷我!I made it!
注册时间: 2004-06-05 帖子: 13192 来自: Toronto
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发表于: 星期五 四月 06, 2007 5:57 pm 发表主题: |
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with snow flakes sliding on ten thousand lakes
in search of dialogues between a heart and a spirit
fresh and peaceful.
good mood _________________
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Lake[Lake] Lake作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
注册时间: 2006-10-10 帖子: 1341 来自: Sky Blue Water
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发表于: 星期三 四月 11, 2007 12:42 pm 发表主题: |
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星子 写到: | with snow flakes sliding on ten thousand lakes
in search of dialogues between a heart and a spirit
fresh and peaceful.
good mood |
谢谢星子。
今天又下雪了。天已变暖,雪花一落地即融化。让我想起 the Plunge of Sakura.
"good mood", that's what I am longing for... |
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星子[ANNA] 星子作品集 酷我!I made it!
注册时间: 2004-06-05 帖子: 13192 来自: Toronto
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发表于: 星期三 四月 11, 2007 2:13 pm 发表主题: |
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贴两首自己的旧作助兴
Snow
I try to depict snow
from a scientific point of view:
transparent and unique
but it reflects the whiteness,
whiteness and
whiteness that you leave behind.
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Icicles
I have seen the blooming stars
in a sudden splash;
I have seen how they settled
in my dream.
Those winters I curled,
seeing snowflakes as flying lilies.
Spring, spring,
too far, and too bitter;
I hang the hope—
we never melt away,
lilies and me. _________________
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Lake[Lake] Lake作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
注册时间: 2006-10-10 帖子: 1341 来自: Sky Blue Water
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发表于: 星期四 四月 12, 2007 8:47 am 发表主题: |
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谢谢星子助兴。
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from a scientific point of view: |
Cool.
引用: | transparent and unique |
But if you could use scientific terms to replace the two words above, that'll be even better... |
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ZY[ZY] ZY作品集 五品知州 (再努力一把就是四品大员了!)
注册时间: 2005-10-20 帖子: 226 来自: 台北盆地
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发表于: 星期四 四月 12, 2007 9:02 am 发表主题: |
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"....hang, from a wanderer's eye
grey clouds flee, grass turns green, grabbing "
*two lines that I dwell on.
"....hang, from a wonderer's eye" is a nice touch. |
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Lake[Lake] Lake作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
注册时间: 2006-10-10 帖子: 1341 来自: Sky Blue Water
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发表于: 星期五 四月 13, 2007 9:57 am 发表主题: |
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ZY 写到: | "....hang, from a wanderer's eye
grey clouds flee, grass turns green, grabbing "
*two lines that I dwell on.
"....hang, from a wonderer's eye" is a nice touch. |
Thanks for your dwelling, ZY. |
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非马[FFFFFF] 非马作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
注册时间: 2005-10-15 帖子: 1053
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发表于: 星期五 五月 04, 2007 5:42 pm 发表主题: |
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A nice poem. Should there be a "-" between "ten" and "thousand"? |
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Lake[Lake] Lake作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
注册时间: 2006-10-10 帖子: 1341 来自: Sky Blue Water
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发表于: 星期六 五月 05, 2007 6:42 pm 发表主题: |
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非马 写到: | A nice poem. Should there be a "-" between "ten" and "thousand"? |
看到非马先生的回贴真高兴。 谢谢您花时间读我的小诗并写评语。
我对什么时候用"-"总把握不好,我再去查查。 谢谢! |
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