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[博弈]

另写 《》村莊

<> The village


He recites: “Qing Shan Guo Wai Xia.”

Those Poets, those…

When did the deathiness occur to them,

Exactly whe—n?


fingers devouring Her plump creamy breasts/
coming out from Her opening as a bystander/
thorns of roses pricked his nameless--ring finger/
the setting sun withdrew the most glorious act/
camp fire madly turned blood the purple curtain/
rain drops fondling ‘n kissing wife’s naked torso/
……
-- He ponders


It is 3:15 am.
The second hand, the heart beat; one by one
--when did it occur to those god damned poets?

Awake,
He decides to leave his temple—the dwelling—

Breasts, roses, afterglows, babies,
The throbbing temple veins, the angelic cries;
God—
What time did it start?

All words need to be elaborated by words;
All times need to be recorded by words;
Then what explains me,
Whom or whit, started the record?

Shall I walk to the edge of the caving earth
Where the fire within burns Zion’ED houses of breasts,
The clouds of primal chaos then tick
And the clock explains my being
So that I can clothe my loved wife, then part?

But then, take a look.
How did they find out?
Wandering, he looks for the recited
….

The watch reads 3:15 am.
_________________
Sometimes I am busy
Sometimes I am free
In between, there's it
Until I find thee...

[[Mark]]

另写 《》村莊

<> The village


He recites: “Qing Shan Guo Wai Xia.”

Those Poets, those…

When did the deathiness occur to them,

Exactly whe—n?


fingers devouring Her plump creamy breasts/
coming out from Her opening as a bystander/
thorns of roses pricked his nameless--ring finger/
the setting sun withdrew the most glorious act/
camp fire madly turned blood the purple curtain/
rain drops fondling ‘n kissing wife’s naked torso/
……
-- He ponders


It is 3:15 am.
The second hand, the heart beat; one by one
--when did it occur to those god damned poets?

Awake,
He decides to leave his temple—the dwelling—

Breasts, roses, afterglows, babies,
The throbbing temple veins, the angelic cries;
God—
What time did it start?

All words need to be elaborated by words;
All times need to be recorded by words;
Then what explains me,
Whom or whit, started the record?

Shall I walk to the edge of the caving earth
Where the fire within burns Zion’ED houses of breasts,
The clouds of primal chaos then tick
And the clock explains my being
So that I can clothe my loved wife, then part?

But then, take a look.
How did they find out?
Wandering, he looks for the recited
….

The watch reads 3:15 am.
_________________
Sometimes I am busy
Sometimes I am free
In between, there's it
Until I find thee...

[anna]

哈哈...那我就斗胆了...

说错了请谅 ....因为只读两遍.

首先不解脉路整体的联系,另"breasts" here two places used... mean ?

前面很具体,,,后面抽象些...WHY?
_________________
---------------------

Anna Yin

《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
<Nightlights> <Seven Nights with the Chinese Zodiac> ...

http://annapoetry.com

[[星子安娜]]

哈哈...那我就斗胆了...

说错了请谅 ....因为只读两遍.

首先不解脉路整体的联系,另"breasts" here two places used... mean ?

前面很具体,,,后面抽象些...WHY?
_________________
---------------------

Anna Yin

《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
<Nightlights> <Seven Nights with the Chinese Zodiac> ...

http://annapoetry.com

[博弈]

[[Mark]]

[Lake]

I find it sensual and evocative.

Your use of 简体、繁体、拼音、符号、形式in your poems remindes me of T.S. Eliot , who (I heard) was once criticized for using French and Latin in his poetry. He responded that English was inadequate to precisely convey his ideas. He was only concerned with bringing his thoughts and images forward. The reader to him was secondary to the process.

I am not that so bold and brave.

[[Lake]]

I find it sensual and evocative.

Your use of 简体、繁体、拼音、符号、形式in your poems remindes me of T.S. Eliot , who (I heard) was once criticized for using French and Latin in his poetry. He responded that English was inadequate to precisely convey his ideas. He was only concerned with bringing his thoughts and images forward. The reader to him was secondary to the process.

I am not that so bold and brave.

[博弈]

[[Mark]]