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博弈[Mark] 博弈作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
注册时间: 2006-09-24 帖子: 1484 来自: San Francisco
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发表于: 星期一 十月 09, 2006 11:59 pm 发表主题: Morning Call in Fremont - Morning walk at home |
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Morning Call in Fremont - Morning walk at home
Dews and fogs blanket the grass I stroll
In the mist of smoke I walk no more
Shivering are the yellow roses, red too
Petals drop with breezes from afar
Steps near yet no shadows fall
Who is it there I feel amour
Sun comes up
Evaporate all moisture from my apple core
Warmth covers my skin ‘n barks start to steam
I smell your breath as petals float across my chin
What is it passed my late night dream
Breakfast is waiting in the bush hub
Lemon tress are smiling at humming birds
Is it Winter or is it Fall
As I retreat from my morning walk
Then empty stomach wakes up to senses
Yep, this is a wonderful world after all _________________ Sometimes I am busy
Sometimes I am free
In between, there's it
Until I find thee... |
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涌流[野人] 涌流作品集 三品按察使 (天,你是斑竹吧?)
注册时间: 2005-04-09 帖子: 653 来自: 西安
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发表于: 星期二 十月 10, 2006 12:41 am 发表主题: Re: Morning Call in Fremont - Morning walk at home |
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欢迎博弈兄! |
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博弈[Mark] 博弈作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
注册时间: 2006-09-24 帖子: 1484 来自: San Francisco
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发表于: 星期二 十月 10, 2006 1:22 am 发表主题: Re: Morning Call in Fremont - Morning walk at home |
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星垂平野阔,涌流兄可好?见有三两旧识,用的都是旧名,不错不错!
我也是看了广告,才来几天.还在东点点,西点点的阶段.
名家效应,希望这是个写,读,评,论(理论)的生态园,
你也好诗泉如涌啊. _________________ Sometimes I am busy
Sometimes I am free
In between, there's it
Until I find thee... |
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Lake[Lake] Lake作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
注册时间: 2006-10-10 帖子: 1341 来自: Sky Blue Water
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发表于: 星期三 十二月 13, 2006 1:42 pm 发表主题: |
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Beautiful. Enjoyed it. Reminded me of a song in a nature film "Good morning world, good morning world, good morning sunshine... ", that was long long time ago.
The imagery used aroused all the senses: smell, touch, sight, hearing, taste, kinesthesia and synaesthesia.
I enjoyed the walk in this poem all along until all of a sudden I heard 'Yep' that really gave me a good laugh... |
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kokho[晓辉] kokho作品集 三品按察使 (天,你是斑竹吧?)
注册时间: 2006-10-25 帖子: 792 来自: Singapore
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发表于: 星期三 十二月 13, 2006 2:48 pm 发表主题: |
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Lake 写到: | Beautiful. Enjoyed it. Reminded me of a song in a nature film "Good morning world, good morning world, good morning sunshine... ", that was long long time ago.
The imagery used aroused all the senses: smell, touch, sight, hearing, taste, kinesthesia and synaesthesia.
I enjoyed the walk in this poem all along until all of a sudden I heard 'Yep' that really gave me a good laugh... |
Lake is a sensitive reader )
.. _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌 |
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星子[ANNA] 星子作品集 酷我!I made it!
注册时间: 2004-06-05 帖子: 13192 来自: Toronto
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发表于: 星期三 十二月 13, 2006 4:24 pm 发表主题: |
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I guess I missed this beautiful poem.
BTW, "Lemon tress ", "trees", typo?
It reminds me of
I wander lonely as a cloud by William Wordsworth
I wandered lonely as a cloud
That floats on high o'er vales and hills,
When all at once I saw a crowd,
A host, of golden daffodils;
Beside the lake, beneath the trees,
Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.
Continuous as the stars that shine
And twinkle on the milky way,
They stretched in never-ending line
Along the margin of a bay:
Ten thousand saw I at a glance,
Tossing their heads in sprightly dance.
The waves beside them danced; but they
Out-did the sparkling waves in glee:
A poet could not but be .,
In such a jocund company:
I gazed---and gazed---but little thought
What wealth the show to me had brought:
For oft, when on my couch I lie
In vacant or in pensive mood,
They flash upon that inward eye
Which is the bliss of solitude;
And then my heart with pleasure fills,
And dances with the daffodils.
William Wordsworth _________________
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博弈[Mark] 博弈作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
注册时间: 2006-09-24 帖子: 1484 来自: San Francisco
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发表于: 星期三 十二月 13, 2006 4:32 pm 发表主题: |
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星子 写到: | I guess I missed this beautiful poem.
BTW, "Lemon tress ", "trees", typo?
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yes, typo, thanks 星子. _________________ Sometimes I am busy
Sometimes I am free
In between, there's it
Until I find thee... |
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