酷我-北美枫

anna · Site Admin 注册时间: 2004-05-02 帖子: 7141

--Revised--
Once life was a cradle,
I tried to swing within,
Yet blown down by whirlwind.

Once life was a shell,
I tried to push out,
my scars were left forever.

Then I knew life as a river;
I was a ripple splashed on gravel,
to fade away without trace.

Solemnly I pray a pebble to be,
washed by tides and chipped,
but always shiny inside.
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Anna Yin

《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
<Nightlights> <Seven Nights with the Chinese Zodiac> ...

http://annapoetry.com

和平岛 · 发表于: 星期二六月 08, 2004 12:12 am 发表主题:

喜欢上你们的英文诗

星子 · 发表于: 星期二六月 08, 2004 2:02 pm 发表主题:

Hi Islandispeace,

I really enjoy write in English, I feel more nature comparing with my chinese poems.

But I still hope to hear from you and others.

晓鸣 · 发表于: 星期三六月 09, 2004 4:49 am 发表主题:

建议你写中文诗时不管不顾,我行我素.跟着自己的感觉走.也就是说不要去想同样的题材别人会怎么写.更不要管文字的细节.全写完再改.你最近的中文诗很好.写多了也就顺了.

我觉得你很多从日常生活的场景中着眼的诗非常好.比如<Fence>和<Funeral>.也许它不是你自己最喜欢的诗,但是我认为如果你的中文诗也这样写的话,你能写出自己独特的风格. 现在流行的中文诗写到日常生活要不然动不动就是微言大意,空洞老套;要不然就故意很琐碎,低级趣味. 如果你用写你的英文诗类似的角度和审美去写中文诗,一定会很好.

这是我的看法.不对不要在意.

星子 · 发表于: 星期三六月 09, 2004 12:39 pm 发表主题:

Thanks James.

<Fence>和<Funeral> are from the real life. I am glad to observe and be inspired by the tributes of life.

I will try to write more chinese poems.

冥王星 · 游客

Anna，这首狠好啊。怎么不见你在那个坛子发过阿？

spine · 发表于: 星期三六月 09, 2004 10:42 pm 发表主题:

刺！如流纹之畅，如风絮之轻，好诗！刺！入肌理而未达脏腑，难有长思！
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