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christine[christine]
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Not sure if it fits. Anyway,
Summer Breeze
cool
wavy
children rolling in the rippling grass
bring home a bag of breeze
smell of the sun
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Hi! Lake:
Thank you for your wonderful contribution to this thread of Xiaoshi. |
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The sun rises and sets;
Hurrying to its place
It rises there again. |
Another Xiaoshi influenced by Christian thought? |
The idea expressed in Champagne's xiaoshi comes from Ecclesiastes, which is the sacred text for Judaism and Christianity.
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Don't imitate me;
it's as boring
as the two halves of a melon. |
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温暖的水獸[温暖的水獸]
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五品知州
（再努力一把就是四品大员了！）
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The sun rises and sets;
Hurrying to its place
It rises there again. |
Another Xiaoshi influenced by Christian thought? |
The idea expressed in Champagne's xiaoshi comes from Ecclesiastes, which is the sacred text for Judaism and Christianity. |
Maybe this idea steals from The Sun Also Rises by Hemingway.
The flowing years steal
Away in darkness.
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舌頭那匹温暖的水獸 馴養地在小小的水族箱中 蠕動
那獸說：是的 我願意 |
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Champagne[Champagne]
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The idea expressed in Champagne's xiaoshi comes from Ecclesiastes, which is the sacred text for Judaism and Christianity. |
Yes.
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Maybe this idea steals from The Sun Also Rises by Hemingway.
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The book's title is taken from Ecclesiastes 1:5: "the sun also ariseth."
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I'm Champagne,
Bottled poetry with sparkling joy. |
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christine[christine]
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The idea expressed in Champagne's xiaoshi comes from Ecclesiastes, which is the sacred text for Judaism and Christianity. |
Yes.
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Maybe this idea steals from The Sun Also Rises by Hemingway.
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The book's title is taken from Ecclesiastes 1:5: "the sun also ariseth." |
Thank you all for your contributions to this thread and your interesting discussions of the Book of Ecclesiastes. |
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ericcoliu[ericcoliu]
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二品总督
（刚入二品，小心做人）
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来自: GTA, Canada
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Slanting sunlight shines
On green moss.
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Time is nothing but a disquiet of the soul |
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robarts[robarts]
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六品通判
（官儿做大了，保持廉洁哦）
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The Moon in the water
conveys its stillness
of reflective meditation.
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If one cannot enjoy reading a book over and over again, there is no use in reading it at all. |
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christine[christine]
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Thank Robarts and ericcoliu for your contributions.
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Slanting sunlight shines
On green moss. |
This xiaoshi reminds me of one of Wang Wei's poems, which I just forgot its title. |
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ericcoliu[ericcoliu]
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Slanting sunlight shines
On green moss. |
This xiaoshi reminds me of one of Wang Wei's poems, which I just forgot its title. |
This xiaoshi is inspired by Wang Wei's Deer Fence.
The mist is waging war
With the skyscrapers,
And winning.
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Time is nothing but a disquiet of the soul |
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christine[christine]
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The mist is waging war
With the skyscrapers,
And winning. |
My poetic reply to your xiaosh is as follows:
It creeps like a disease,
Turning solid buildings to shadows.
Everything looks like long-deserved,
Haunted, like the last day of time. |
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ericcoliu[ericcoliu]
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| 发表于: 星期四 八月 07, 2008 4:04 pm 发表主题: |
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Maple leaves floating
On the river
Slip away
Into the far distance –
This is no man’s world.
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Time is nothing but a disquiet of the soul |
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christine[christine]
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| A simple yet thoughtful xiaoshi with a Zen Buddhist touch. |
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