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星子[ANNA] 星子作品集 酷我!I made it!
注册时间: 2004-06-05 帖子: 13192 来自: Toronto
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发表于: 星期三 一月 18, 2006 10:14 am 发表主题: It is not fair |
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Son, you have never met children
in Africa, in Rwanda
those children with
bare feet, skinny limbs
and bony faces
you have never heard
rain penetrating their roofs,
wind blowing
through broken windows
you have never tasted
muddy water
dry pale food
raw reed roots
you have never felt
their hungry stomach
thirsty throat
cracked hands
you have never worked
under the hot sun,
at the lonely shelter
in the wild field
yet you scream
it is not fair--
your toys are not new,
your school is not fun
your clothes are not trendy
your food is not tasty
Son, open your eyes
see what they see,
lend an ear
hear what they hear
no food to feed them,
no shoes for their little feet,
no toys belong to them
no school at all
only the dust, the smoky air
the rain and the mosque.
Silence is left over there,
in another world
they have no choice,
no freedom,
no promising future…
“It is not fair,
It is not fair...
It is not fair—“
Son, you have never met children
in Africa, in Rwanda
those children with
bare feet, skinny limbs
and bony faces
you have never heard
rain penetrating their roofs,
wind blowing
through broken windows
you have never tasted
muddy water
dry pale food
raw reed roots
you have never felt
their hungry stomach
thirsty throat
cracked hands
you have never worked
under the hot sun,
at the lonely shelter
in the wild field
yet you scream
it is not fair--
your toys are not new,
your school is not fun
your clothes are not trendy
your food is not tasty
Son, open your eyes
see what they see,
lend an ear
hear what they hear
no food to feed them,
no shoes for their little feet,
no toys belong to them
no school at all
only the dust, the smoky air
the rain and the mosque.
Silence is left over there,
in another world
they have no choice,
no freedom,
no promising future…
“It is not fair,
It is not fair...
It is not fair—“
No voice raises there!
最后进行编辑的是 星子 on 星期五 一月 20, 2006 11:53 pm, 总计第 5 次编辑 |
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skyhorse[FFFFFF] skyhorse作品集 九品县令 (一不小心,做了官儿了。)
注册时间: 2005-12-27 帖子: 36
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发表于: 星期三 一月 18, 2006 11:08 am 发表主题: |
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I see
A beautiful butterfly
Flying hign
Above a maple tree. |
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countryroad[路谣] countryroad作品集 四品府丞 (封疆大吏也!)
注册时间: 2005-01-04 帖子: 412
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发表于: 星期三 一月 18, 2006 11:20 am 发表主题: |
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I read a beautiful mind. Touching poem touched my heart. |
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星子[ANNA] 星子作品集 酷我!I made it!
注册时间: 2004-06-05 帖子: 13192 来自: Toronto
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发表于: 星期三 一月 18, 2006 11:54 am 发表主题: |
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Thanks skyhorse...
thanks countryroad...
this is for my son... and try to read in his school _________________
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skyhorse[FAFAFA] skyhorse作品集 九品县令 (一不小心,做了官儿了。)
注册时间: 2005-12-27 帖子: 36
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发表于: 星期三 一月 18, 2006 12:30 pm 发表主题: |
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这首诗之所以动人,是因为有感而发,是“情绪找到了思想,思想找到了语言。”之
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星子[ANNA] 星子作品集 酷我!I made it!
注册时间: 2004-06-05 帖子: 13192 来自: Toronto
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发表于: 星期三 一月 18, 2006 1:25 pm 发表主题: |
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说得很对。。。其实早想写这样一首。。。一直没动笔。今天一动情感和思绪自然而来。。。
由于我写得多的是个人小资情绪,所以很想改变。。。从社会角度多写写有意义的东西,关注生活,关注社会 _________________
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朱新魁[FAFAFA] 朱新魁作品集 三品按察使 (天,你是斑竹吧?)
注册时间: 2004-10-18 帖子: 995 来自: 郑州市
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发表于: 星期四 一月 19, 2006 10:21 pm 发表主题: |
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good |
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skyhorse[FFFFFF] skyhorse作品集 九品县令 (一不小心,做了官儿了。)
注册时间: 2005-12-27 帖子: 36
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发表于: 星期五 一月 20, 2006 2:08 am 发表主题: |
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星子 写到: | 说得很对。。。其实早想写这样一首。。。一直没动笔。今天一动情感和思绪自然而来。。。
由于我写得多的是个人小资情绪,所以很想改变。。。从社会角度多写写有意义的东西,关注生活,关注社会 |
相信一颗更明亮的”星子“会升上天空。
天马愚见:
作家坐在家里写屋子是”坐家“
”坐家“坐在家里写窗外是作家
各位作家是否同意? |
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LavenderSwing[我还没有昵称] LavenderSwing作品集 四品府丞 (封疆大吏也!)
注册时间: 2004-05-29 帖子: 321 来自: China
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发表于: 星期五 一月 20, 2006 11:46 pm 发表主题: |
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写给自己看无妨什么都可写。。。。
想走出去,写的东西就要有内涵和社会效应了。 |
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ljm001[星海] ljm001作品集 五品知州 (再努力一把就是四品大员了!)
注册时间: 2006-01-15 帖子: 152 来自: 大连
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发表于: 星期六 一月 21, 2006 12:06 am 发表主题: |
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同意各位高见。所以现代诗更注重内涵。 _________________ 听坡上林涛低鸣,看崖下海浪拍岸 |
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Hierroenzyme[慕容] Hierroenzyme作品集 五品知州 (再努力一把就是四品大员了!)
注册时间: 2005-05-21 帖子: 285 来自: 成都
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发表于: 星期六 一月 28, 2006 11:39 am 发表主题: |
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What a beautiful song
It touches me deep. _________________ 纵马荡枪江山远,一生奋武为红颜 |
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兰紫野萍[野萍] 兰紫野萍作品集 七品按察司 (我开始管这里的事儿了)
注册时间: 2005-11-11 帖子: 77
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发表于: 星期日 二月 05, 2006 11:58 pm 发表主题: |
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很可喜的改变,祝贺!如何更开阔,建议你带孩子一起到中国云南、贵州等偏远内地去看看,到那儿就会有很震撼的东西从内心自然迸发的:) |
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星子[ANNA] 星子作品集 酷我!I made it!
注册时间: 2004-06-05 帖子: 13192 来自: Toronto
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发表于: 星期一 二月 06, 2006 8:47 am 发表主题: |
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You are right.
We are too lucky to feel the true harsh life. _________________
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