酷我-北美枫

[swan.eagle]

Echo of Spring

Echoing up with where resonant vibration be. It is flirtation or run deep. This is the season of able to be sensitivity, be sensitive to granules in the air, and to bygones, and sensibilities. Using the word, it is a little of oddity, but is very felicitous. The one of tender sensibility would like to console oneself by the stardust. And the one of intrepid would like to enrich him oneself by. That all could be accredited responding to a stimulus in ganglia.
We love the world, the one of full of mutative and mystic.
Those sadness thought us have caused the collapse of be, relax its attention. So that, it seized the opportunity, the spirit is galloping and soaring.
Oh, injured one’s heard, the born beauty had not been change, and even more enrichment, and more flowery and bright.
All right, need to understand again the definition of goodliness, and the meaning of blessedness.

Go ahead with fear and anxiety. That palpitate with fear couldn’t cumber marching, and gloominess couldn’t obstruct from sunshine, too.
No way, but only yearning and hankering for felicity, that could never be lose one’s way. Felicity, yearning towards be. Want to found the kingdom of oneself own, that could be merry, and happy.
Would have a day, when flower would be blooming again. But injuring and distress on the way would be into memory finally.
This is the principle of nature.
The one of coagulate is just the ties of heart, that one and one is bended and knobbed, but never abnegate the desire to go up, and never abnegate the striving to go up. As far the beauty would be showed as limpid and bright. The beauty show up vital singularity, that give now and future more fancy and blessing.

Very pusillanimity, very recreance, wishes to have relied on, have love, wish for ……
The way, would have if walked. Therefore, go on ahead. Go on, with a pure heart.
Empressement, pure heart, could bring boundless force.
Go on ahead, walk sincerely, that would have force, and have able to conquer the difficulty, and step into the path. Even if it would rough be, that is a way, too. That could prove walker one’s verve and volition.
Explain? No, never explain. What is called mistake will be showing real. True, it isn’t deceiving.


　　春之声

　　响起来， 哪里忽轻忽重的振动。这是个让人过敏的季节，对空气粉粒过敏，对往事过敏，对情感过敏。使用这个词汇，有些奇特，不过很恰当。脆弱的人喜欢用幻觉来安慰自己，勇猛的人喜欢用幻觉来丰富自己，都可归于对某种致敏性的神经中枢反应。
　　我们爱这个世界，这充满变幻和神秘的世界。
　　那些悲伤，以为我们早已经被压垮了，放松警惕，心就乘机展开双翼腾飞起来。
　　原来，受伤的心灵，并不因伤害而改变原有的美，甚至更丰富，更绚丽璀灿。
　　对，需要重新去理解美好的定义，幸福的内涵。

　　颤颤栗栗地，向前走，惊悸并不能阻碍步伐，黑暗也不能阻挡阳光。
　　没有路，唯一可不致迷途的，就是对幸福的渴望和追求。幸福，始终向往着。要找到一片属于自己，可以快乐的王国，幸福之国。
　　总有一天，花儿会重新开放，而伤痛，终会成为路途中的回忆。
　　这是自然法则。
　　沉凝的，就是一个个心结。曲曲纽纽，却永不放弃向上的欲望，向上地奋争，直把美展现得剔透尽致，成为生命的奇观，给现实和未来予以更多的幻想和祝福。

　　很胆怯，很懦弱，希望有依托，有袒护，希望……
　　路，是要走才有的。因此，向前走，走吧，带着一颗真诚的心。
　　真诚，真诚的心，可以产生无穷的力量。
　　向前走，真诚地走，就有力量，就能克服困难，就能踏出一条路来。哪怕会有坎坷，那也是一条路，可以证明行者的气魄和意志。
　　解释，不，从来无需解释。所谓误，终会凸显真。真理，不会欺骗。

[[shinegirl]]

Echo of Spring

Echoing up with where resonant vibration be. It is flirtation or run deep. This is the season of able to be sensitivity, be sensitive to granules in the air, and to bygones, and sensibilities. Using the word, it is a little of oddity, but is very felicitous. The one of tender sensibility would like to console oneself by the stardust. And the one of intrepid would like to enrich him oneself by. That all could be accredited responding to a stimulus in ganglia.
We love the world, the one of full of mutative and mystic.
Those sadness thought us have caused the collapse of be, relax its attention. So that, it seized the opportunity, the spirit is galloping and soaring.
Oh, injured one’s heard, the born beauty had not been change, and even more enrichment, and more flowery and bright.
All right, need to understand again the definition of goodliness, and the meaning of blessedness.

Go ahead with fear and anxiety. That palpitate with fear couldn’t cumber marching, and gloominess couldn’t obstruct from sunshine, too.
No way, but only yearning and hankering for felicity, that could never be lose one’s way. Felicity, yearning towards be. Want to found the kingdom of oneself own, that could be merry, and happy.
Would have a day, when flower would be blooming again. But injuring and distress on the way would be into memory finally.
This is the principle of nature.
The one of coagulate is just the ties of heart, that one and one is bended and knobbed, but never abnegate the desire to go up, and never abnegate the striving to go up. As far the beauty would be showed as limpid and bright. The beauty show up vital singularity, that give now and future more fancy and blessing.

Very pusillanimity, very recreance, wishes to have relied on, have love, wish for ……
The way, would have if walked. Therefore, go on ahead. Go on, with a pure heart.
Empressement, pure heart, could bring boundless force.
Go on ahead, walk sincerely, that would have force, and have able to conquer the difficulty, and step into the path. Even if it would rough be, that is a way, too. That could prove walker one’s verve and volition.
Explain? No, never explain. What is called mistake will be showing real. True, it isn’t deceiving.


　　春之声

　　响起来， 哪里忽轻忽重的振动。这是个让人过敏的季节，对空气粉粒过敏，对往事过敏，对情感过敏。使用这个词汇，有些奇特，不过很恰当。脆弱的人喜欢用幻觉来安慰自己，勇猛的人喜欢用幻觉来丰富自己，都可归于对某种致敏性的神经中枢反应。
　　我们爱这个世界，这充满变幻和神秘的世界。
　　那些悲伤，以为我们早已经被压垮了，放松警惕，心就乘机展开双翼腾飞起来。
　　原来，受伤的心灵，并不因伤害而改变原有的美，甚至更丰富，更绚丽璀灿。
　　对，需要重新去理解美好的定义，幸福的内涵。

　　颤颤栗栗地，向前走，惊悸并不能阻碍步伐，黑暗也不能阻挡阳光。
　　没有路，唯一可不致迷途的，就是对幸福的渴望和追求。幸福，始终向往着。要找到一片属于自己，可以快乐的王国，幸福之国。
　　总有一天，花儿会重新开放，而伤痛，终会成为路途中的回忆。
　　这是自然法则。
　　沉凝的，就是一个个心结。曲曲纽纽，却永不放弃向上的欲望，向上地奋争，直把美展现得剔透尽致，成为生命的奇观，给现实和未来予以更多的幻想和祝福。

　　很胆怯，很懦弱，希望有依托，有袒护，希望……
　　路，是要走才有的。因此，向前走，走吧，带着一颗真诚的心。
　　真诚，真诚的心，可以产生无穷的力量。
　　向前走，真诚地走，就有力量，就能克服困难，就能踏出一条路来。哪怕会有坎坷，那也是一条路，可以证明行者的气魄和意志。
　　解释，不，从来无需解释。所谓误，终会凸显真。真理，不会欺骗。

[anna]

SWAN,
谢谢你在我博客留言, 其实最细小的东西都可以让人幸福...我喜欢读Self-discovering 这方面的书,你会找到快乐和平衡的...没有东西是完美的,但依然可以去欣赏和感受幸福

----这首 读的感觉中文比英文好...

英文有翻译痕迹...

多用完整句,多感觉一下...

这个翻译本身难度很大...因为中式思维很明显.
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Anna Yin

《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
<Nightlights> <Seven Nights with the Chinese Zodiac> ...

http://annapoetry.com

[[星子安娜]]

SWAN,
谢谢你在我博客留言, 其实最细小的东西都可以让人幸福...我喜欢读Self-discovering 这方面的书,你会找到快乐和平衡的...没有东西是完美的,但依然可以去欣赏和感受幸福

----这首 读的感觉中文比英文好...

英文有翻译痕迹...

多用完整句,多感觉一下...

这个翻译本身难度很大...因为中式思维很明显.
_________________
---------------------

Anna Yin

《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
<Nightlights> <Seven Nights with the Chinese Zodiac> ...

http://annapoetry.com

[ericcoliu]

I agree with Anna's comment on your work.

I like hopeful sentiments revealed in your work. Spring should be the season of promising hope.

One little thing about the title. I think you don't need to put "the" in front of spring, which is the season of the year. There are a lot of English songs sharing the same title, without "the", with that of your work.
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Time is nothing but a disquiet of the soul

[[ericcoliu]]

I agree with Anna's comment on your work.

I like hopeful sentiments revealed in your work. Spring should be the season of promising hope.

One little thing about the title. I think you don't need to put "the" in front of spring, which is the season of the year. There are a lot of English songs sharing the same title, without "the", with that of your work.
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Time is nothing but a disquiet of the soul

[swan.eagle]

Hi, Anna, Ericcoliu,
你们给我很大启发

谢谢ericcoliu！我改了
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作品集 http://www.coviews.com/viewtopic.php?p=174481
诗集 http://www.coviews.com/viewtopic.php?p=174480
《勃朗宁夫人抒情十四行诗》http://coviews.com/viewtopic.php?p=277439#277439
在诗歌领域，没有哪一样能像童话，包容无限。

[[shinegirl]]

Hi, Anna, Ericcoliu,
你们给我很大启发

谢谢ericcoliu！我改了
_________________
作品集 http://www.coviews.com/viewtopic.php?p=174481
诗集 http://www.coviews.com/viewtopic.php?p=174480
《勃朗宁夫人抒情十四行诗》http://coviews.com/viewtopic.php?p=277439#277439
在诗歌领域，没有哪一样能像童话，包容无限。

[swan.eagle]

彻夜雨，晨簌微风，带来丝丝寒凉，是秋么，是春？
凝露，偶然落上这叶，往事不禁如烟如梦，幻灭幻起......
不知不觉已瞥见无数风景。回顾，身后亦然有一条规整道路，蜿蜒，美丽，铺趟在润泽繁茂的原野。前方，未知世界，延伸......
未知不可怕，真地不可怕。
相信，真诚心底，明亮照耀，可以开拓勋绩......
_________________
作品集 http://www.coviews.com/viewtopic.php?p=174481
诗集 http://www.coviews.com/viewtopic.php?p=174480
《勃朗宁夫人抒情十四行诗》http://coviews.com/viewtopic.php?p=277439#277439
在诗歌领域，没有哪一样能像童话，包容无限。

[[shinegirl]]

彻夜雨，晨簌微风，带来丝丝寒凉，是秋么，是春？
凝露，偶然落上这叶，往事不禁如烟如梦，幻灭幻起......
不知不觉已瞥见无数风景。回顾，身后亦然有一条规整道路，蜿蜒，美丽，铺趟在润泽繁茂的原野。前方，未知世界，延伸......
未知不可怕，真地不可怕。
相信，真诚心底，明亮照耀，可以开拓勋绩......
_________________
作品集 http://www.coviews.com/viewtopic.php?p=174481
诗集 http://www.coviews.com/viewtopic.php?p=174480
《勃朗宁夫人抒情十四行诗》http://coviews.com/viewtopic.php?p=277439#277439
在诗歌领域，没有哪一样能像童话，包容无限。