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东西[东西]
东西作品集
八品县丞
（又一个不小心，升了！）
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 发表于: 星期二 十月 28, 2008 2:37 pm 发表主题: Urban Dread (Cinquain, edited again) |
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Urban Dread (Cinquain)
Urban
dread. Many have
seen, heard, felt, spoken to
fleeting shadows, spooky figures
at night
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East is East, and West is West, and never the twain shall meet.
最后进行编辑的是 东西 on 星期一 四月 06, 2009 12:43 pm, 总计第 3 次编辑 |
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ericcoliu[ericcoliu]
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二品总督
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来自: GTA, Canada
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| 发表于: 星期二 十月 28, 2008 8:07 pm 发表主题: Re: Urban Dread (Cinquain) |
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| 东西 写到: | Urban Dread (Cinquain)
Urban
dread. Many have
seen, heard, felt, spoken to
billowy shadows, spooky figures
at night |
In my view, many have made the claim that they "have
seen, heard, felt, spoken to
billowy shadows, spooky figures
at night"
Why do you emphasize "urban"?
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fanfan[FAFAFA]
fanfan作品集
四品府丞
（封疆大吏也！）
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来自: Canada
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| 发表于: 星期三 十月 29, 2008 7:20 am 发表主题: Re: Urban Dread (Cinquain) |
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Why do you emphasize "urban"? |
Maybe it means the city folks have an obsessive affinity for ghosts.
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Urban Dread (Cinquain)
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I can feel the pure weight of a well thought out title
A Halloween treat.
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Don't imitate me;
it's as boring
as the two halves of a melon. |
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Lake[Lake]
Lake作品集
二品总督
（刚入二品，小心做人）
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来自: Sky Blue Water
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| 发表于: 星期三 十月 29, 2008 9:20 pm 发表主题: Re: Urban Dread (Cinquain) |
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| 东西 写到: | Urban Dread (Cinquain)
Urban
dread. Many have
seen, heard, felt, spoken to
billowy shadows, spooky figures
at night |
It has an "urban at night" feel.
For a cinquain, is there one extra syllable in L4? |
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christine[christine]
christine作品集
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| 发表于: 星期四 十月 30, 2008 9:33 am 发表主题: Re: Urban Dread (Cinquain) |
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It has an "urban at night" feel.
For a cinquain, is there one extra syllable in L4? |
Yes, I agree with you.
I don't know why people love to talk about ghost stories.
Expelling the fear of fear? |
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东西[东西]
东西作品集
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| 发表于: 星期六 十一月 01, 2008 11:35 am 发表主题: Re: Urban Dread (Cinquain) |
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Why do you emphasize "urban"? |
Maybe it means the city folks have an obsessive affinity for ghosts.
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Yes, an unhealthy obsession.
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East is East, and West is West, and never the twain shall meet. |
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东西[东西]
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八品县丞
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| 发表于: 星期六 十一月 01, 2008 11:37 am 发表主题: Re: Urban Dread (Cinquain) |
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It has an "urban at night" feel.
For a cinquain, is there one extra syllable in L4? |
Yes, I agree with you.
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Thanks for your sharp eye. I've revised my poem.
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I don't know why people love to talk about ghost stories.
Expelling the fear of fear? |
Maybe it's an essential part of the main reasons for why people love to talk about ghost stories or to watch horror movies.
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East is East, and West is West, and never the twain shall meet. |
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东西[东西]
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| 发表于: 星期四 三月 26, 2009 12:49 pm 发表主题: Re: Urban Dread (Cinquain) |
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I've edited my poem.
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Maybe it's an essential part of the main reasons for why people love to talk about ghost stories or to watch horror movies. |
Japanese horror cinema, or "J-Horror" has been making a name for itself in recent years. Hollywood Chillers, The Ring and The Grudge, are adaptations of recent J-Horror flicks and their success will surely spawn others.
Read Japan's Five Most Frightening Horror Movies Of All Time!
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东西[东西]
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| 发表于: 星期一 四月 06, 2009 12:44 pm 发表主题: |
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I've edited my poem again.
Has anyone seen the movies I mentioned in the link above?
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