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Champagne[Champagne]
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 发表于: 星期一 十月 13, 2008 8:39 am 发表主题: Living for the moment (Contemporary Haibun) |
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Living for the moment (Contemporary Haibun)
Live one day at a time; each day has enough trouble of its own. Do not grieve over things past, for they are gone. Let bygones be bygones. Do not worry about things impending, for you have no control of them. Tomorrow will worry itself. Live for the present moment and make the most use of it.
Today, fully-lived, will make
every yesterday a memory of happiness
and each tomorrow a vision of hope.
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fanfan[FFFFFF]
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| 发表于: 星期一 十月 13, 2008 4:15 pm 发表主题: |
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This is a piece of didactic writing with a touch of Zen Buddhism.
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Champagne[Champagne]
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| 发表于: 星期一 十月 13, 2008 11:16 pm 发表主题: |
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| fanfan 写到: | | This is a piece of didactic writing with a touch of Zen Buddhism. |
It means good or bad?
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温暖的水獸[温暖的水獸]
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| 发表于: 星期二 十月 14, 2008 12:24 pm 发表主题: |
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| Champagne 写到: |
It means good or bad? |
It means this piece is morally instructive -- seize the day!
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舌頭那匹温暖的水獸 馴養地在小小的水族箱中 蠕動
那獸說：是的 我願意 |
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Lake[Lake]
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| 发表于: 星期二 十月 14, 2008 9:17 pm 发表主题: |
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Champagne,
I have to agree with Fanfan's comment. Honestly, if it is a message, it's fine; as a literary work, however, it lacks a poetic touch. (So you see, good or bad, it all depends.) And also, the haiku(?) at the end looks a bit long to my eye. Am I too harsh? Sorry. |
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Champagne[Champagne]
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| 发表于: 星期三 十月 15, 2008 9:23 am 发表主题: |
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| Lake 写到: |
I have to agree with Fanfan's comment. Honestly, if it is a message, it's fine; as a literary work, however, it lacks a poetic touch.
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Thanks for the read and sharing your thoughts on “didactic writing.”
Although a lot of ancient literary works produced in Western and Eastern cultures infused with didactic elements, generally speaking, since the rise of Romanticism and Aestheticism in the 19th century, didactic writing has been viewed negatively as foreign to true art. The term didacticism usually pejoratively refers to the use of literary means to a doctrinal end. However, in my view, the boundaries of didactic literature are unstable and open to dispute. More importantly, didactic writing can be done from an imaginative perspective, such as Christie Malry's Own Double Entry by B. S. Johnson's.
The prominent Chinese poet Ai Qing had written a lot of short poems in the form of aphorism, the majority of which are didactic.
| Lake 写到: |
(So you see, good or bad, it all depends.) And also, the haiku(?) at the end looks a bit long to my eye. |
A good point. Thanks for your valuable comments.
| Lake 写到: | | Am I too harsh? Sorry. |
Feel free to criticize my poems. I'm a man with a thick face and a big heart.
Sorry about my reply which reads like a piece of didactic writing.
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Lake[Lake]
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| 发表于: 星期三 十月 15, 2008 7:43 pm 发表主题: |
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Good to know what kind of man you are.
I suppose didactic or preachy sometimes is unavoidable. |
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浴恩福[浴恩福]
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| 发表于: 星期一 十月 20, 2008 8:56 am 发表主题: |
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| Champagne 写到: |
Thanks for the read and sharing your thoughts on “didactic writing.”
Although a lot of ancient literary works produced in Western and Eastern cultures infused with didactic elements, generally speaking, since the rise of Romanticism and Aestheticism in the 19th century, didactic writing has been viewed negatively as foreign to true art. The term didacticism usually pejoratively refers to the use of literary means to a doctrinal end. However, in my view, the boundaries of didactic literature are unstable and open to dispute. More importantly, didactic writing can be done from an imaginative perspective, such as Christie Malry's Own Double Entry by B. S. Johnson's.
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Good points.
I think, sometimes, we need a well-crafted, thought-provoking piece of didactic writing.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts on "living in and for the moment."
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