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dundas[dundas] dundas作品集 五品知州 (再努力一把就是四品大员了!)
注册时间: 2008-02-23 帖子: 214
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发表于: 星期二 八月 05, 2008 12:51 pm 发表主题: 在夕光里, Sunset Glow (revised) |
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在夕光里,顾城
在夕光里,
你把嘴紧紧抿起:
"只有一刻钟了"
就是说 现在上演悲剧。
"要相隔十年 百年!"
"相距千里 万里!"
忽然你顽皮地一笑,
暴露了真实的年纪。
"话忘了一句。"
"嗯 肯定忘了一句。"
我们始终没有想出
太阳却已悄悄安息。
Sunset Glow
In sunset's glow,
your lips tightly closed,
you say, "There are only fifteen minutes left,"
meaning the tragedy has already begun.
“Maybe ten or a hundred years apart!”
“Maybe a thousand or ten thousand miles away!"
Suddenly, you smile playfully
showing your real age.
“I forgot to say one sentence.”
“Yes, you have definitely forgotten that one sentence.”
We never figured out what that sentence was,
not noticing that the sun had set. _________________ My throat knew thirst before the structure
Of skin and vein around the well
最后进行编辑的是 dundas on 星期四 八月 21, 2008 9:20 am, 总计第 3 次编辑 |
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dundas[dundas] dundas作品集 五品知州 (再努力一把就是四品大员了!)
注册时间: 2008-02-23 帖子: 214
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发表于: 星期二 八月 05, 2008 12:53 pm 发表主题: |
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This poem reminds me of Richard Linklater's Before Sunset, a sequel to the film Before Sunrise, a story about Jesse (Ethan Hawke) and Celine (Julie Delpy) who meet nine years in Paris after they first met on a train in Europe and wound up spending one romantic evening together in Vienna. _________________ My throat knew thirst before the structure
Of skin and vein around the well |
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fanfan[FAFAFA] fanfan作品集 四品府丞 (封疆大吏也!)
注册时间: 2007-12-27 帖子: 353 来自: Canada
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发表于: 星期二 八月 05, 2008 7:57 pm 发表主题: |
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To my best knowledge about Gu Chen’s poems, Sunset is one of the most romantic poems he ever wrote.
We live, enjoy our life, see sunset glow,
Love and are loved, and then we can die together. _________________ Don't imitate me;
it's as boring
as the two halves of a melon. |
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ericcoliu[ericcoliu] ericcoliu作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
注册时间: 2007-05-29 帖子: 1393 来自: GTA, Canada
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发表于: 星期二 八月 05, 2008 10:34 pm 发表主题: |
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dundas 写到: | This poem reminds me of Richard Linklater's Before Sunset, a sequel to the film Before Sunrise, a story about Jesse (Ethan Hawke) and Celine (Julie Delpy) who meet nine years in Paris after they first met on a train in Europe and wound up spending one romantic evening together in Vienna. |
In terms of mood and the conception of romantic love, this poem is resonant with Before Sunset.
One of the most memorable scenes is that Celine sings a song for Jesse before he leaves:
The lyrics of Celine's song:
Let me sing you a waltz
Out of nowhere, out of my thoughts
Let me sing you a waltz
About this one night stand
You were, for me, that night
Everything I always dreamt of in life
But now you're gone
You are far gone
All the way to your island of rain
It was for you just a one night thing
But you were much more to me, just so you know
I don't care what they say
I know what you meant for me that day
I just want another try, I just want another night
Even if it doesn't seem quite right
You meant for me much more than anyone I've met before
One single night with you, little Jesse, is worth a thousand with anybody
I have no bitterness, my sweet
I'll never forget this one night thing
Even tomorrow in other arms, my heart will stay yours until I die Let me sing you a waltz
Out of nowhere, out of my blues
Let me sing you a waltz About this lovely one night stand _________________ Time is nothing but a disquiet of the soul |
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christine[christine] christine作品集 四品府丞 (封疆大吏也!)
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发表于: 星期五 八月 08, 2008 10:12 am 发表主题: Re: 在夕光里, Sunset |
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dundas 写到: |
在夕光里
Sunset
We never figured out that sentence all evening,
but the sun has set in rest. |
Why not In Sunset's Glow or Sunset Glow?
Yes, that magic sentence -- I LOVE YOU. |
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dundas[dundas] dundas作品集 五品知州 (再努力一把就是四品大员了!)
注册时间: 2008-02-23 帖子: 214
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发表于: 星期一 八月 11, 2008 8:58 am 发表主题: |
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ericcoliu 写到: |
In terms of mood and the conception of romantic love, this poem is resonant with Before Sunset.
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Yes, thanks for the lyrics of the song.
fanfan 写到: |
To my best knowledge about Gu Chen’s poems, Sunset is one of the most romantic poems he ever wrote.
We live, enjoy our life, see sunset glow,
Love and are loved, and then we can die together. |
Yes.
A lovely and wel thought out response. _________________ My throat knew thirst before the structure
Of skin and vein around the well |
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dundas[dundas] dundas作品集 五品知州 (再努力一把就是四品大员了!)
注册时间: 2008-02-23 帖子: 214
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发表于: 星期一 八月 11, 2008 9:01 am 发表主题: Re: 在夕光里, Sunset |
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christine 写到: |
Yes, that magic sentence -- I LOVE YOU. |
Why did you spell out the magic sentence? _________________ My throat knew thirst before the structure
Of skin and vein around the well |
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东西[东西] 东西作品集 八品县丞 (又一个不小心,升了!)
注册时间: 2008-06-07 帖子: 53 来自: East_West
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发表于: 星期二 八月 12, 2008 12:25 pm 发表主题: Re: 在夕光里, Sunset |
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dundas 写到: | christine 写到: |
Yes, that magic sentence -- I LOVE YOU. |
Why did you spell out the magic sentence? |
Why did you narrow down the multiple possibilities for that magic sentence? _________________ East is East, and West is West, and never the twain shall meet. |
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robarts[robarts] robarts作品集 六品通判 (官儿做大了,保持廉洁哦)
注册时间: 2008-03-24 帖子: 114 来自: Canada
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发表于: 星期四 八月 14, 2008 12:28 pm 发表主题: Re: 在夕光里, Sunset |
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东西 写到: | dundas 写到: | christine 写到: |
Yes, that magic sentence -- I LOVE YOU. |
Why did you spell out the magic sentence? |
Why did you narrow down the multiple possibilities for that magic sentence? |
I agree with you.
That magic sentence could be "I like you." _________________ If one cannot enjoy reading a book over and over again, there is no use in reading it at all. |
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clair[clair] clair作品集 七品按察司 (我开始管这里的事儿了)
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发表于: 星期四 八月 14, 2008 3:33 pm 发表主题: Re: 在夕光里, Sunset Glow |
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dundas 写到: |
我们始终没有想出
太阳却已悄悄安息。
We never figured out that sentence all evening,
but the sun has set in rest. |
My suggestion is as follows:
We never figured out what that sentence was,
not noticing that the sun had set. _________________ This dark
Ceiling without a star |
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fanfan[FAFAFA] fanfan作品集 四品府丞 (封疆大吏也!)
注册时间: 2007-12-27 帖子: 353 来自: Canada
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发表于: 星期五 八月 15, 2008 7:13 am 发表主题: Re: 在夕光里, Sunset Glow |
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clair 写到: |
dundas 写到: |
我们始终没有想出
太阳却已悄悄安息。
We never figured out that sentence all evening,
but the sun has set in rest. |
My suggestion is as follows:
We never figured out what that sentence was,
not noticing that the sun had set. |
Or not noticing that the sun had set for its rest.
Good suggestion. _________________ Don't imitate me;
it's as boring
as the two halves of a melon. |
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dundas[dundas] dundas作品集 五品知州 (再努力一把就是四品大员了!)
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发表于: 星期四 八月 21, 2008 9:20 am 发表主题: Re: 在夕光里, Sunset Glow |
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fanfan 写到: |
clair 写到: |
dundas 写到: |
我们始终没有想出
太阳却已悄悄安息。
We never figured out that sentence all evening,
but the sun has set in rest. |
My suggestion is as follows:
We never figured out what that sentence was,
not noticing that the sun had set. |
Or not noticing that the sun had set for its rest.
Good suggestion. |
Thank you all for your helpful suggestions. _________________ My throat knew thirst before the structure
Of skin and vein around the well |
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