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帖子发表于: 星期三 五月 14, 2008 10:43 am    发表主题: Help them! 引用并回复

Our words aching,
Yet cannot soothe their pain;
Our voices anxious,
Yet cannot pull them out.
Lives buried under the rubble,
souls suffer among earthquakes.

What have they done to deserve this?
What hope can they grasp?
thousands of lives,
thousands,
still in their childhood,
each, a flower bulb,
each, a promising blossom,
just a few days ago,
just a few days ago!

Now they are buried in the debris!

With broken hearts,
our hands dig the cruel and cold fact,
with helpless tears,
we hear their crying from underground!

Help them,
Help them,
God, and gods!

---------to help China Earthquake relief ----
To donate to relief efforts visit:

Canadian Red Cross

World Vision Canada
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帖子发表于: 星期三 五月 14, 2008 11:41 am    发表主题: Re: Help them! 引用并回复

An emotionally charged poem.

星子 写到:



thousand,
still in their childhood,

each, a flower bulb,
each, a promising blossoms,

With broken heart,
our hands dig the cruel and cold fact,



My suggestions are as follows:

thousands,
still in their childhood,

each, a flower bulb,
each, a promising blossom,

With broken hearts,
our hands dig the cruel and cold fact,
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二品总督
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帖子发表于: 星期三 五月 14, 2008 12:05 pm    发表主题: 引用并回复

Let's pray and do what we can.

The government and people are helping.

引用:
What have they done to deserve this?


This is too familiar. The natural disaster is cruel no matter what you have done.
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帖子发表于: 星期三 五月 14, 2008 8:25 pm    发表主题: 引用并回复

Hi christine,

revised it. Thanks.

Hi Lake,

Yes. I know it is a natural disaster. and government and people are helping. Just hope more help from all the world!
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帖子发表于: 星期三 五月 14, 2008 11:20 pm    发表主题: 引用并回复

星子,

I know what you mean. It's just that some lives are gone in just a second and I can't do anything which makes me gloomy. It's promising to see international help is rushing in and the government is willing to accept it.

My thoughts are with those who are suffering from the quake.
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帖子发表于: 星期四 五月 15, 2008 7:11 am    发表主题: 引用并回复

Hi Lake,

the same to me. Thanks.

Anna
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帖子发表于: 星期四 五月 15, 2008 7:11 am    发表主题: 引用并回复

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(14 May, 2008 20:40:33)
Owlet
Anna,
I'm so sorry to see the people of China suffer so from this Quake. I hope your family was able to find shelter. My thoughts are with you.

Bren


You have sounded the gong.

May I bring this poem to our poets&writers group tonight?

Doug



Hi Bren,

Thank you very much. My family live anothe province.

But a few days ago, after the Quake, my brother went there to help with a medicine group.

Anna


Hi Doug,
Please share with your group.

I was invited to read poems for the Quake relief local group in Toronto.

Thanks.

Anna
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三品按察使
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帖子发表于: 星期四 五月 15, 2008 10:15 am    发表主题: Re: Help them! 引用并回复

星子 写到:
Our words aching,
Yet cannot soothe their pain;
Our voices anxious,
Yet cannot pull them out.
Lives buried under the rubble,
souls suffer among earthquakes.

What have they done to deserve this?
What hope can they grasp?
thousands of lives,
thousands,
still in their childhood,
each, a flower bulb,
each, a promising blossom,
just a few days ago,
just a few days ago!

Now they are buried in the debris!

With broken hearts,
our hands dig the cruel and cold fact,
with helpless tears,
we hear their crying from underground!

Help them,
Help them,
God, and gods!

---------to help China Earthquake relief ----
To donate to relief efforts visit:

Canadian Red Cross

World Vision Canada



that we chineses will thanks to you!
I like it very much.
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诗歌可能是一种唯一生活在世间的生命与精神密切交流的暗夜中的幽灵,它是存在活生生的生命的文学体裁,它的眼睛能看到你我的灵魂,并游走在你我精神、魂魄、肉体的四周。 真正的真善美是敢于裸露的,放眼苍穹看去星空,那才是真爱、真善、真美。——南柯舟


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星子 写到:
Our words aching,
Yet cannot soothe their pain;
Our voices anxious,
Yet cannot pull them out.
Lives buried under the rubble,
souls suffer among earthquakes.

What have they done to deserve this?
What hope can they grasp?
thousands of lives,
thousands,
still in their childhood,
each, a flower bulb,
each, a promising blossom,
just a few days ago,
just a few days ago!

Now they are buried in the debris!

With broken hearts,
our hands dig the cruel and cold fact,
with helpless tears,
we hear their crying from underground!

Help them,
Help them,
God, and gods!

---------to help China Earthquake relief ----
To donate to relief efforts visit:

Canadian Red Cross

World Vision Canada



That Chinese will thanks to you!
I like it very much.
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诗歌可能是一种唯一生活在世间的生命与精神密切交流的暗夜中的幽灵,它是存在活生生的生命的文学体裁,它的眼睛能看到你我的灵魂,并游走在你我精神、魂魄、肉体的四周。 真正的真善美是敢于裸露的,放眼苍穹看去星空,那才是真爱、真善、真美。——南柯舟
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帖子发表于: 星期六 五月 17, 2008 9:19 pm    发表主题: 引用并回复

Thanks 南柯舟.

Anna
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帖子发表于: 星期二 五月 27, 2008 7:33 am    发表主题: 引用并回复

I saw your moving poem on the Sichuan earthquake. Allow me, please, to express my heartfelt sorrow and to convey my deep sympathy to the Chinese people on the occasion of this horrible human tragedy.

Paul Hartal
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