酷我-北美枫

[非马]

除夕



对三百多个没发芽的日子

也只有这样狠下心来

爆米花般把它们爆掉


而经历过枪林弹雨的手

引燃这么一串无害的鞭炮

却依然战战兢兢

如临大敌



CHINESE NEW YEAR

Maybe it’s the only way
to pop the dud days of the gone year

yet in lighting a string of firecrackers
hands that survived bullets and shells
still tremble uncontrollably
as if facing a fierce enemy

[[FAFAFA]]

除夕



对三百多个没发芽的日子

也只有这样狠下心来

爆米花般把它们爆掉


而经历过枪林弹雨的手

引燃这么一串无害的鞭炮

却依然战战兢兢

如临大敌



CHINESE NEW YEAR

Maybe it’s the only way
to pop the dud days of the gone year

yet in lighting a string of firecrackers
hands that survived bullets and shells
still tremble uncontrollably
as if facing a fierce enemy

[星子]

It is interesting to see how you imagine the days dud and the firecraker to bullets and shells.

But I have trouble to bring them together in my thoughts and emotions.

For me, I think the transition is a little forced. But the chinese original story behind this is good.

Anyway, Happy Chinese New Year.
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[[ANNA]]

It is interesting to see how you imagine the days dud and the firecraker to bullets and shells.

But I have trouble to bring them together in my thoughts and emotions.

For me, I think the transition is a little forced. But the chinese original story behind this is good.

Anyway, Happy Chinese New Year.
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[ericcoliu]

[[ericcoliu]]

[Lake]

It is S2 that makes the reader ponder.

[[Lake]]

It is S2 that makes the reader ponder.

[fanfan]

[[FAFAFA]]

[星子]

If we put this poem into a specific situation, it will make sense.

It depicts a person void in his days feared of the time. Though he may have done many deeds to prove his fearless characters, indeed he can not face to his true feeling of his emptiness.
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[[ANNA]]

If we put this poem into a specific situation, it will make sense.

It depicts a person void in his days feared of the time. Though he may have done many deeds to prove his fearless characters, indeed he can not face to his true feeling of his emptiness.
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