酷我-北美枫

星子 · 酷我！I made it！ 注册时间: 2004-06-05 帖子: 13192 来自: Toronto

Sometimes I do feel the urge to express myself. It is like the underground river struggling to find its way through the dark. I long for the torch, a breakthrough of light and voice gushes forth from the depth of my heart to find the listener. I am the receiver.

Sometimes I do dream a lot. They are strange dreams. They repeat the same scene with my runaway in the fog. I wonder what I run for. They seem to be puzzles and I convince myself life is a puzzle.

All these years I have challenged myself for changes. Now I understand life is currents of a river, each person pushes through his/her way. I wonder where my destination is and where Ming is going.
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北夜 · 发表于: 星期六十二月 15, 2007 7:17 am 发表主题:

beautiful

星子 · 发表于: 星期六十二月 15, 2007 10:53 am 发表主题:

谢谢北夜...我是一段一段写,还没想好整体构思.只是先把部分感受情节等先写...
练练笔先.

看你现在快乐天使了,为你高兴 Very Happy

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北夜 · 发表于: 星期二十二月 18, 2007 9:04 am 发表主题:

我自己感觉每日的练笔其实比真正创作作品要有意义. 坚持锻炼自己的观察力思考力, 同时也慢慢学会平衡自己. 我不时的写的小说其实算不上作品, 只是素描写生而已. 但我很喜欢, 不仅锻炼了自己, 也在完善自己.

费了很大的代价和时间, 我才悟出一个很简单的道理: 快乐不是别人给的, 是自己寻找到的.

星子 · 发表于: 星期二十二月 18, 2007 9:48 am 发表主题:

快乐不是别人给的, 是自己寻找到的.

是的...很高兴你早悟出了,我也是最近几年悟到的.

写作不仅锻炼了自己, 也在完善自己. It is not just self-discovery, but also self-fulfillment.
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fanfan · 发表于: 星期四十二月 27, 2007 11:18 am 发表主题:

poetic prose made of shifting images.
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Don't imitate me;
it's as boring
as the two halves of a melon.

星子 · 发表于: 星期五十二月 28, 2007 9:18 am 发表主题:

welcome Fanfan.

Thanks.

Hope to read yours.
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Lake · 发表于: 星期五十二月 28, 2007 4:36 pm 发表主题:

nice read.

北夜 · 发表于: 星期日十二月 30, 2007 4:22 pm 发表主题:

Read again, still love it, beautifully done.

To be honest, I hardly give comment on someone’s poem (neither English or Chinese) as I am rubbish on that indeed, but even me can feel something from your work, that shows how good you really are.

Happy New Year!

星子 · 发表于: 星期日十二月 30, 2007 7:02 pm 发表主题:

Hi Lake,

Happy New year. Thanks.

Hi 夜子,

thanks. Happy new year too. I really have much want to write, but now I need a quiet time to write on... and I seldom have that.
But with your encouragement, I will push myself to write on. Thanks!
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秋天的枫叶林 · 发表于: 星期一十二月 31, 2007 1:31 am 发表主题:

life is currents of a river, each person pushes through his/her way.

good! best regards to you !
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因本真而活，持生命之青色。