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Lake · 发表于: 星期五七月 06, 2007 1:09 pm 发表主题: Haiku Train

在一个英文网站，我们玩一个Haiku Train 的游戏。前一首的最后一句必须是下一首的第一句，由此接下去。字数，韵脚不需考虑太多，重要的是Haiku的实质，精神。网友都是即席而作，因为晚一步，你想用的好句子就被别人接去了。

每日忙忙碌碌，难得有大把时间写长篇大论；一日不涂鸦几句，心里又不舒服。在这个接龙游戏中，倒很自在，有感觉了，就丢几句在那，也不必精雕细琢，也不花太多时间。随便跟了几帖，今天一看，哈，也有十几首了呢。

现摘几首出来，斜体字是网友的，正体字是我的。因为只贴我跟的，中间也就见不到连贯性了。黑体字是接上文的。娱乐大家。

in spring
eyes water and noses run
pollen rides the air

pollen rides the air
shut myself in, green unfolds
outside the window

danger lurks unseen
don't hold your breath
for it is only a bad dream...

for it is only a bad dream
that'll shatter under the sun
flowers bloom, birds sing

I will never see
the star again
after the storm in my eyes

after the storm in my eyes
a clear blue sky
wishes carried by kite

day in, day out
he reads her letters
waits for the call

waits for the call
spring's gone, winter's come
frost on his temples

Our world mutates
From black and white days
to a new colour of life...

to a new colour of life
breaking free from cocoon
sings a butterfly

weary feet stumble
along rice fields
in the rain

in the rain
soaked to the skin
mind cleansed

mind cleansed
of vanity -
haiku reigns

haiku reigns
sounds like a full stop with
an exclamation!

crying eyes on the ground
a moment to mourn the past
clears way for future

clears way for future
no time to look back
travelers hasten on

All I have left is the rain
And storm between the tears
The moon keeps the memories

The moon keeps the memories
The Milky Way separates
Two lovers

the smell of ripening fruit
invades my nostrils
summer's sweet air

summer's sweet air
filled with firecrackers and beer
a sleepless night

summer's spume
dropping all memories
when I was a child

when I was a child
mom and dad were my gardeners
I their nightingale

I their nightingale,
their little bird singing
in sweet, soft voice.

anna · Site Admin 注册时间: 2004-05-02 帖子: 7141

just read that....very enjoying

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in sweet, soft voice
ripples among memories
melt away coldness
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Anna Yin

《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
<Nightlights> <Seven Nights with the Chinese Zodiac> ...

http://annapoetry.com

Lake · 发表于: 星期六七月 07, 2007 8:16 pm 发表主题:

anna · Site Admin 注册时间: 2004-05-02 帖子: 7141

Thanks. Let's go on...

snowman shrinks
crystal tears shed for Scarecrow
another autumn
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Anna Yin

《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
<Nightlights> <Seven Nights with the Chinese Zodiac> ...

http://annapoetry.com

Lake · 发表于: 星期六七月 07, 2007 9:36 pm 发表主题:

anna · Site Admin 注册时间: 2004-05-02 帖子: 7141

Lake, very nice one.
再来一个

cicada choir trails
awaken decades' waitings
into short-lived joys
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Anna Yin

《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
<Nightlights> <Seven Nights with the Chinese Zodiac> ...

http://annapoetry.com

Lake · 发表于: 星期六七月 07, 2007 11:34 pm 发表主题:

anna · Site Admin 注册时间: 2004-05-02 帖子: 7141

Hi Lake,

- ksana·刹那?
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Anna Yin

《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
<Nightlights> <Seven Nights with the Chinese Zodiac> ...

http://annapoetry.com

Lake · 发表于: 星期日七月 08, 2007 9:21 pm 发表主题:

You got it, anna.

anna · Site Admin 注册时间: 2004-05-02 帖子: 7141

beauty of ksana
outlives the far realm of myth
mirrors true value
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Anna Yin

《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
<Nightlights> <Seven Nights with the Chinese Zodiac> ...

http://annapoetry.com

Lake · 发表于: 星期一七月 09, 2007 1:29 pm 发表主题:

anna · Site Admin 注册时间: 2004-05-02 帖子: 7141

he scratches his head
a few picked up by a bird
chirping at Night Muse
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Anna Yin

《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
<Nightlights> <Seven Nights with the Chinese Zodiac> ...

http://annapoetry.com

Lake · 发表于: 星期二七月 10, 2007 2:35 pm 发表主题:

anna · Site Admin 注册时间: 2004-05-02 帖子: 7141

a few ( value? or scratched 头皮 Very Happy

)
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Anna Yin

《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
<Nightlights> <Seven Nights with the Chinese Zodiac> ...

http://annapoetry.com

Lake · 发表于: 星期二七月 10, 2007 4:59 pm 发表主题: