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Idle: Sky High Clouds Pale
By(China)He jun
Tr. Lake

Polish your poems with time
those written with your life
to be strong, smooth and fresh
In summer when days are not hot
imagine you walk alone
in a heavy snowfall
obscuring all heaven and earth
or melt snow to make tea
sit silent under the bodhi tree
Idle: sky high clouds pale

闲：天高云淡
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用时光打磨生命的诗稿
让它坚实、光洁和鲜嫩
在夏季还不热的日子
幻想一场大雪铺天盖地
独自走在大雪中
或者用雪煮茶、静坐
菩提树下。闲：天高云淡
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Lake · 发表于: 星期二五月 22, 2007 10:06 am 发表主题:

向何均学写阐诗
送一棵菩提树消夏 Smile

Ven. Bodhicitta meditating in tree!

何均 · 发表于: 星期二五月 22, 2007 10:12 am 发表主题:

问好Lake.谢谢你的美意.
希望朋友们都能在自己的菩提树下躲阴静心.
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anna · Site Admin 注册时间: 2004-05-02 帖子: 7141

也送一首旧作....

Perplexed

Smooth a piece of paper,
parch it under the sunlamp—
to dry winter damp stains.

It arches with warmth,
flaps slightly.
Without waiting for my first verse,
it is gone with wind.

惘

平展一张纸
在太阳灯下晾晒—
希望去除冬天的潮气。

它暖暖地拱起，
微微地振翅。
未等第一句诗行，
已随风而去！
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Anna Yin

《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
<Nightlights> <Seven Nights with the Chinese Zodiac> ...

http://annapoetry.com

何均 · 发表于: 星期二五月 22, 2007 10:15 am 发表主题:

问好anna.
拜读大作,很有禅味.
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Lake · 发表于: 星期二五月 22, 2007 10:19 am 发表主题:

嗯，anna 这首不错，有味。

Lake · 发表于: 星期五五月 25, 2007 11:57 am 发表主题:

有趣的反馈，帖两个上来

beautiful! profound and evocative! very buddha! very zen! i love poems like this - poems that make one question and think! abstraction is hard to get right in poetry and you did it very well here. open to interpretation and filled with inspiration! stunning! i'm gonna read it again!

This is a beautiful poem, wonderful images... I don't know what a bodhi tree is but I love the sound of it and it transports me to another, more tranquil world... The best for me were these lines:

in a heavy snowfall
obscuring all heaven and earth
or melt snow to make tea
sit silent under the bodhi tree

很佛，很禅，菩提树 Smile

何均 · 发表于: 星期一五月 28, 2007 8:00 am 发表主题:

辛苦lake!
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