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ZY[ZY] ZY作品集 五品知州 (再努力一把就是四品大员了!)
注册时间: 2005-10-20 帖子: 226 来自: 台北盆地
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发表于: 星期一 五月 07, 2007 5:57 pm 发表主题: Sponge |
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A sponge I am, sucking up
Frozen air and polluted emotions
In my hometown now too close for comfort,
Where usually the distance beyond the waves of night
Laid a misty calm over the churning sea of memories.
Now my hands are tied and my mouth covered
With useless clouds of jet-lag reminding me
Of my faraway home in a foreign shore.
When tides are low under the waning moon
In Taipei of mid-winter, our leaders cursed and swore as usual
In temperature unseasonably warm and sticky
About a future corrupt and divided
By a deep strait of history
Where some would never cross
And some had never crossed.
But you are sponges held in contempt
For refusing venom and bile. Shadowy ventriloquy
From politicians slimy as squids never was up
To your taste. So, we continue to sing,
Per chance to dance sometimes, when the crazies in the night yield
their city streets to our rambling and mumbling fanciful rants.
I stumble through a deserted garden
To hear, in the shore of my fuzzy mind
New songs in a public park
On days and nights that I dreamt
I was a part of. Only in feeble lines
Of images and metaphors can I deliver
My homesick love darkened by thundering clouds
In voices always too soft to be heard
By the young eagles rushing by in the angry winds .
So to my painter friends of words and rhythm, I silently salute
In the dark hours between too early and too late.
The loneliness in this murky hour is but a façade.
Behind the broken walls we all collect the sad and absurd sands of life
From separate ways. When I leave you too soon
I may remember a few more faces, maybe not?
But your voices in the dim nights under the Milky Way
I shall silently steal and carry in my little sponge of an aging mind.
ZY
(an old composition, while spending new year's eve in Taipei, 2006)
最后进行编辑的是 ZY on 星期二 五月 08, 2007 9:11 pm, 总计第 1 次编辑 |
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Lake[Lake] Lake作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
注册时间: 2006-10-10 帖子: 1341 来自: Sky Blue Water
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发表于: 星期一 五月 07, 2007 9:43 pm 发表主题: |
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As always it flows. I see a sponge soaked heavy with disturbing emotions.
All the best, |
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ZY[ZY] ZY作品集 五品知州 (再努力一把就是四品大员了!)
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发表于: 星期二 五月 08, 2007 12:29 pm 发表主题: |
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Lake,
These years, I get terribly upset watching Taiwanese politics.
It has gotten so vicous and corrupt.
But, no matter who won out in 2008, it looks like the situation will get better.
So, I am hopeful.
Thanks for your comment.
ZY |
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星子[ANNA] 星子作品集 酷我!I made it!
注册时间: 2004-06-05 帖子: 13192 来自: Toronto
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发表于: 星期二 五月 08, 2007 2:46 pm 发表主题: |
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Thanks ZY.
I print it and read it through. Very good.
the image of sponge is well used and the homesick and atmosphere behind is smoothly combined.
I enjoy it, very thoughtful and meaningful. _________________
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Lake[Lake] Lake作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
注册时间: 2006-10-10 帖子: 1341 来自: Sky Blue Water
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发表于: 星期二 五月 08, 2007 4:00 pm 发表主题: |
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ZY 写到: | Lake,
These years, I get terribly upset watching Taiwanese politics.
It has gotten so vicous and corrupt.
But, no matter who won out in 2008, it looks like the situation will get better.
So, I am hopeful.
Thanks for your comment.
ZY |
Yes, let's hope for the best! |
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ZY[ZY] ZY作品集 五品知州 (再努力一把就是四品大员了!)
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发表于: 星期二 五月 08, 2007 4:16 pm 发表主题: |
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星子 写到: | Thanks ZY.
I print it and read it through. Very good.
the image of sponge is well used and the homesick and atmosphere behind is smoothly combined.
I enjoy it, very thoughtful and meaningful. |
星子,
Thanks for your encouragement and kind words.
Sponge, in fact is how I feel like when I get to go back to Taipei. Living oversea often makes one feel disconnected. But once you are physically back to your hometown, you feel soaking in all the going-ons around you and then you are reconnected to the homeland.
Cheers.
ZY |
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博弈[Mark] 博弈作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
注册时间: 2006-09-24 帖子: 1484 来自: San Francisco
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发表于: 星期二 五月 08, 2007 8:47 pm 发表主题: Re: Sponge |
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ZY 写到: | A sponge I am, sucking up
Frozen air and polluted emotions
In my hometown now too close for comfort,
Where usually the distance beyond the waves of night
Laid a misty calm over the churning sea of memories.
Now my hands are tied and my mouth covered
With useless clouds of jet-lag reminding me
Of my faraway home in a foreign shore.
When tides are low under the waning moon
In Taipei of mid-winter, our leaders cursed and swore as usual
In temperature unseasonably warm and sticky
About a future corrupt and divided
By a deep strait of history
Where some would never cross
And some had never crossed.
But you are sponges held in contempt
For refusing venom and bile. Shadowy ventriloquy
From politicians slimy as squids never was up
To your taste. So, we continue to sing,
Per chance to dance sometimes, when the crazies in the night yield
their city streets to our rambling and mumbling fanciful rants.
I stumble through a deserted garden
To hear, in the shore of my fuzzy mind
New songs in a public park
On days and nights that I dreamt
I was a part of. Only in feeble lines
Of images and metaphors can I deliver
My homesick love darkened by thundering clouds
In voices always too soft to be heard
By the young eagles rushing by in the angry winds .
So to my painter friends of words and rhythm, I silently salute
In the dark hours between too early and too late.
The loneliness in this murky hour is but a façade.
Behind the broken walls we all collect the sad and absurd sands of life
From separate ways. When I leave you too soon
I may remember a few more faces, maybe not?
But your voices in the dim nights under the Milky Way
I shall silently stole and carry in my little sponge of an aging mind.
ZY
(an old composition, while spending new year's eve in Taipei, 2006) |
very good composition, vivid imagery.
stole is a noun transformed to a verb (scarf) or a typo? _________________ Sometimes I am busy
Sometimes I am free
In between, there's it
Until I find thee... |
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ZY[ZY] ZY作品集 五品知州 (再努力一把就是四品大员了!)
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发表于: 星期二 五月 08, 2007 9:10 pm 发表主题: |
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博弈,
I stand corrected. It's a typo.
Thanks for your kind comment.
ZY |
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Lake[Lake] Lake作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
注册时间: 2006-10-10 帖子: 1341 来自: Sky Blue Water
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发表于: 星期三 五月 09, 2007 8:21 am 发表主题: |
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Some words, phrases and lines highlighted by 博弈 are very English, I mean 很地道。I also like this line:
引用: | In temperature unseasonably warm and sticky |
lots to learn... |
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ZY[ZY] ZY作品集 五品知州 (再努力一把就是四品大员了!)
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发表于: 星期三 五月 09, 2007 7:48 pm 发表主题: |
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Ah, we all have lots to learn. |
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非马[FAFAFA] 非马作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
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发表于: 星期日 五月 13, 2007 3:03 pm 发表主题: |
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A good poem. It reminds me of one of the short poems I wrote years ago on the same topic:
HOMESICKNESS
suffering badly from homesickness
he returns to his homeland
upon returning to his homeland
he suffers even worse from homesickness
there's nothing he can do about it
there's nothing he can do about it |
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ZY[ZY] ZY作品集 五品知州 (再努力一把就是四品大员了!)
注册时间: 2005-10-20 帖子: 226 来自: 台北盆地
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发表于: 星期三 五月 16, 2007 8:46 am 发表主题: |
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工作上連忙了幾天,現在才得空上來.
多謝非馬前輩讀詩和鼓勵了.也謝謝您的舊作的和應.
問好了. |
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星子[ANNA] 星子作品集 酷我!I made it!
注册时间: 2004-06-05 帖子: 13192 来自: Toronto
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发表于: 星期三 五月 16, 2007 8:50 am 发表主题: |
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也应和一首,,两年前旧作
Nostalgia is a Growing Tree
Nostalgia, a growing tree,
Its branches stretch over the tall fence.
I keep manicuring it;
the falling fragments bedew my face.
Its branches stretch over the tall fence,
as a lantern beckons in the distance.
Who holds the light high
to embrace me in its silvery cocoon?
I cannot help reminiscing,
my shattered shadow wrapped inside.
The falling fragments bedew my face;
a growing tree, nostalgia is. _________________
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ZY[ZY] ZY作品集 五品知州 (再努力一把就是四品大员了!)
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发表于: 星期四 五月 17, 2007 9:21 am 发表主题: |
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Xing-Zhi,
Thanks for your reply and your wonderful poem.
Nostalgia, indeed, is like a growing tree. And over time, it grows into a deep deep forest.
Take care.
ZY |
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