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博弈[Mark] 博弈作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
注册时间: 2006-09-24 帖子: 1484 来自: San Francisco
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发表于: 星期日 十二月 10, 2006 6:13 pm 发表主题: ate |
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Blck berry fa as blly:
A shoe
Tennis shoe
My buddy to chew
Or not to chew
Does not seem to bother him
A pinecone
Charles Bronson
Single malt and
Maple twigs
Vines in grail
Woman in love
Symantec winter
As conception languaging
A shoot
Dogged shoot
My body too, hiew
Or nay hiew
Dose not seen, two butlers keen
A pile on
Charged brown
Wine ‘n grill
Wow, men in gloves
Sisters mad at waiting
A conception laid egg
then
The last day;
The smell of firewoods
The smell of coffee
The smell of family laugh
The smell of snow
The smell of fire works
The smell of cigars
The smell of roast beef
The smell of bells
Ding Dong!
Ding Dong!
The first day.
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This is a piece of experimental work.
ps. Hiew, fully called Hacker's View, is a hexadecimal file editor.
Hacker: Computer systems are vulnerable to the infiltration of viruses or ‘bugs’ which give control of the computers to hackers with malicious intent. This has led to a growing demand for anti-virus programs designed by computer security experts.
Symantec: Software manufacturer of utility and development applications for Windows and Macintosh platforms. Products include ACT!, Norton Utilities, Norton AntiVirus, Symantec AntiVirus for Macintosh, Symantec Cafe.
Grail is womb
Language: used as a verb here _________________ Sometimes I am busy
Sometimes I am free
In between, there's it
Until I find thee... |
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kokho[晓辉] kokho作品集 三品按察使 (天,你是斑竹吧?)
注册时间: 2006-10-25 帖子: 792 来自: Singapore
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发表于: 星期一 十二月 11, 2006 3:00 am 发表主题: |
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I have to study in detail and revert again )
.. _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌 |
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星子[ANNA] 星子作品集 酷我!I made it!
注册时间: 2004-06-05 帖子: 13192 来自: Toronto
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发表于: 星期三 十二月 13, 2006 10:36 pm 发表主题: |
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really experimental work.
Not sure the first day, last day... what is the implying? _________________
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Lake[Lake] Lake作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
注册时间: 2006-10-10 帖子: 1341 来自: Sky Blue Water
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发表于: 星期三 十二月 13, 2006 11:33 pm 发表主题: |
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Decipher: Blck berry fa as blly Black berry fat as belly
I am very poor at riddles, please give readers some hints on what you are experimenting.
Whatever it is, it sings. |
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博弈[Mark] 博弈作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
注册时间: 2006-09-24 帖子: 1484 来自: San Francisco
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发表于: 星期四 十二月 14, 2006 10:47 am 发表主题: |
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Lake 写到: | Decipher: Blck berry fa as blly Black berry fat as belly
I am very poor at riddles, please give readers some hints on what you are experimenting.
Whatever it is, it sings. |
sensitive antenna.
this is a 'language poetry' type.
see, now you are involved.
even ate is not complete as it was eten
the poem is not completed, by itself.
go figure _________________ Sometimes I am busy
Sometimes I am free
In between, there's it
Until I find thee... |
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博弈[Mark] 博弈作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
注册时间: 2006-09-24 帖子: 1484 来自: San Francisco
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发表于: 星期四 十二月 14, 2006 11:05 am 发表主题: |
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星子 写到: | really experimental work.
Not sure the first day, last day... what is the implying? |
if i add a line after the line
"The first day."
'Happy New Year 2007!"
will it be clear, in a sense that you are 'at' an eve,
but this limits it;
it could be others, or simply none _________________ Sometimes I am busy
Sometimes I am free
In between, there's it
Until I find thee... |
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Lake[Lake] Lake作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
注册时间: 2006-10-10 帖子: 1341 来自: Sky Blue Water
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发表于: 星期四 十二月 14, 2006 12:56 pm 发表主题: |
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博弈 写到: |
sensitive antenna.
this is a 'language poetry' type.
see, now you are involved.
even ate is not complete as it was eten
the poem is not completed, by itself.
go figure |
Obscure. Poor me! 再猜一个,就赶快下车。
ate fate
好像一边喝着malt, 一边发呓语. 文字游戏,甘拜下风。 |
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