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帖子发表于: 星期五 十二月 01, 2006 11:01 pm    发表主题: shadow 引用并回复

I hide myself,
shy away from poetry.
Crystal spirits seep through
eyes.

The path we foresaw
led to the ending.
Turn around,
I see my face drown in your dream.
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三品按察使
(天,你是斑竹吧?)
三品按察使<BR>(天,你是斑竹吧?)


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帖子发表于: 星期一 十二月 04, 2006 2:24 pm    发表主题: 引用并回复

诗歌不会在文字里出现奇迹 :))

诗歌是学问,美学,哲学,禅学和创造力的 镜子!

所以 严格来说,这有几样美术,和文字 可以叫艺术。。。
诗歌是其中一种!


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帖子发表于: 星期一 十二月 04, 2006 2:41 pm    发表主题: 引用并回复

kokho 写到:
诗歌不会在文字里出现奇迹 :))

诗歌是学问,美学,哲学,禅学和创造力的 镜子!

所以 严格来说,这有几样美术,和文字 可以叫艺术。。。
诗歌是其中一种!



haha.... what exactly do you want to say?
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帖子发表于: 星期一 十二月 04, 2006 11:39 pm    发表主题: Re: shadow 引用并回复

星子 写到:
I hide myself,
shy away from poetry.

Crystal spirits seep through
eyes.

The path we foresaw
is led to the ending.

Turn around,
my face drowns in your dream.


Why do you shy away from poetry, 星子? Because the path is leading to an end? But I see you are on the track. Did I miss anything here?

This poem reminds me of my first poem that tells how scaring poetry seems to me. Shocked

Cheers,
.
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帖子发表于: 星期二 十二月 05, 2006 12:02 am    发表主题: 引用并回复

Lake, There are a lot of stories inside.

Poetry is another world for me. A dreamy world, a perfect place, no conflict, but only sweet dreams. My spirit is inside.

yet, somehow, I know life is life... I wrote a lot of poems before, just hope there was another one waiting there as another half of me...

Then I found it may be wrong...I need to appreciate the real life and value true feelings.
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帖子发表于: 星期二 十二月 05, 2006 1:06 pm    发表主题: 引用并回复

星子 写到:
Lake, There are a lot of stories inside.

Poetry is another world for me. A dreamy world, a perfect place, no conflict, but only sweet dreams. My spirit is inside.

yet, somehow, I know life is life... I wrote a lot of poems before, just hope there was another one waiting there as another half of me...

Then I found it may be wrong...I need to appreciate the real life and value true feelings.


With your explanation, I think I understand it better now.
You are/were pretty ideal. Smile
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三品按察使
(天,你是斑竹吧?)
三品按察使<BR>(天,你是斑竹吧?)


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帖子发表于: 星期三 十二月 06, 2006 1:28 pm    发表主题: 引用并回复

看到你们的交流,很温馨 ;))

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帖子发表于: 星期五 十二月 08, 2006 11:50 am    发表主题: 引用并回复

星子,

昨天拜访了你的博客,你很忙啊。好事。

听到你朋友的事,我想她现在最需要的是理解、鼓励、帮助。Or simply need someone to listen to.
昨晚又读到这首诗,你把诗的意思讲给她听听,或许能帮上点儿忙。

One Art
by Elizabeth Bishop


The art of losing isn't hard to master;
so many things seem filled with the intent
to be lost that their loss is no disaster.

Lose something every day. Accept the fluster
of lost door keys, the hour badly spent.
The art of losing isn't hard to master.

Then practice losing farther, losing faster:
places, and names, and where it was you meant
to travel. None of these will bring disaster.

I lost my mother's watch. And look! my last, or
next-to-last, of three loved houses went.
The art of losing isn't hard to master.

I lost two cities, lovely ones. And, vaster,
some realms I owned, two rivers, a continent.
I miss them, but it wasn't a disaster.


--Even losing you (the joking voice, a gesture
I love) I shan't have lied. It's evident
the art of losing's not too hard to master
though it may look like (Write it!) like disaster.


With my empathy and sympathy,

Lake
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帖子发表于: 星期日 十二月 10, 2006 12:25 pm    发表主题: 引用并回复

Thank you, Lake.

Great poem. I like it.
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帖子发表于: 星期一 十二月 11, 2006 1:37 am    发表主题: 引用并回复

Lake 写到:
星子,

昨天拜访了你的博客,你很忙啊。好事。

听到你朋友的事,我想她现在最需要的是理解、鼓励、帮助。Or simply need someone to listen to.
昨晚又读到这首诗,你把诗的意思讲给她听听,或许能帮上点儿忙。

One Art
by Elizabeth Bishop


The art of losing isn't hard to master;
so many things seem filled with the intent
to be lost that their loss is no disaster.

Lose something every day. Accept the fluster
of lost door keys, the hour badly spent.
The art of losing isn't hard to master.

Then practice losing farther, losing faster:
places, and names, and where it was you meant
to travel. None of these will bring disaster.

I lost my mother's watch. And look! my last, or
next-to-last, of three loved houses went.
The art of losing isn't hard to master.

I lost two cities, lovely ones. And, vaster,
some realms I owned, two rivers, a continent.
I miss them, but it wasn't a disaster.


--Even losing you (the joking voice, a gesture
I love) I shan't have lied. It's evident
the art of losing's not too hard to master
though it may look like (Write it!) like disaster.


With my empathy and sympathy,

Lake


Lake is a caring friend, I should learn from you Wink)))

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