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博弈[Mark]
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二品总督
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二品总督<BR>(刚入二品,小心做人)


注册时间: 2006-09-24
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来自: San Francisco

帖子发表于: 星期日 十二月 10, 2006 6:13 pm    发表主题: ate 引用并回复

Blck berry fa as blly:

A shoe
Tennis shoe
My buddy to chew
Or not to chew

Does not seem to bother him
A pinecone
Charles Bronson

Single malt and
Maple twigs

Vines in grail
Woman in love
Symantec winter

As conception languaging

A shoot
Dogged shoot
My body too, hiew
Or nay hiew

Dose not seen, two butlers keen
A pile on
Charged brown

Wine ‘n grill
Wow, men in gloves
Sisters mad at waiting

A conception laid egg

then

The last day;

The smell of firewoods
The smell of coffee
The smell of family laugh
The smell of snow

The smell of fire works
The smell of cigars
The smell of roast beef
The smell of bells

Ding Dong!
Ding Dong!

The first day.
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This is a piece of experimental work.

ps. Hiew, fully called Hacker's View, is a hexadecimal file editor.
Hacker: Computer systems are vulnerable to the infiltration of viruses or ‘bugs’ which give control of the computers to hackers with malicious intent. This has led to a growing demand for anti-virus programs designed by computer security experts.

Symantec: Software manufacturer of utility and development applications for Windows and Macintosh platforms. Products include ACT!, Norton Utilities, Norton AntiVirus, Symantec AntiVirus for Macintosh, Symantec Cafe.

Grail is womb

Language: used as a verb here
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kokho[晓辉]
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三品按察使
(天,你是斑竹吧?)
三品按察使<BR>(天,你是斑竹吧?)


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来自: Singapore

帖子发表于: 星期一 十二月 11, 2006 3:00 am    发表主题: 引用并回复

I have to study in detail and revert again Wink)

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酷我!I made it!
酷我!I made it!


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帖子发表于: 星期三 十二月 13, 2006 10:36 pm    发表主题: 引用并回复

really experimental work.


Not sure the first day, last day... what is the implying?
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Lake[Lake]
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二品总督
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注册时间: 2006-10-10
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来自: Sky Blue Water

帖子发表于: 星期三 十二月 13, 2006 11:33 pm    发表主题: 引用并回复

Decipher: Blck berry fa as blly Arrow Black berry fat as belly Rolling Eyes

I am very poor at riddles, please give readers some hints on what you are experimenting.

Whatever it is, it sings.
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二品总督
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二品总督<BR>(刚入二品,小心做人)


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帖子发表于: 星期四 十二月 14, 2006 10:47 am    发表主题: 引用并回复

Lake 写到:
Decipher: Blck berry fa as blly Arrow Black berry fat as belly Rolling Eyes

I am very poor at riddles, please give readers some hints on what you are experimenting.

Whatever it is, it sings.


sensitive antenna.
this is a 'language poetry' type.
see, now you are involved.
even ate is not complete as it was eten
the poem is not completed, by itself.

go figure Embarassed
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帖子发表于: 星期四 十二月 14, 2006 11:05 am    发表主题: 引用并回复

星子 写到:
really experimental work.


Not sure the first day, last day... what is the implying?


if i add a line after the line

"The first day."
'Happy New Year 2007!"

will it be clear, in a sense that you are 'at' an eve,
but this limits it;
it could be others, or simply none
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来自: Sky Blue Water

帖子发表于: 星期四 十二月 14, 2006 12:56 pm    发表主题: 引用并回复

博弈 写到:

sensitive antenna.
this is a 'language poetry' type.
see, now you are involved.
even ate is not complete as it was eten
the poem is not completed, by itself.

go figure Embarassed


Obscure. Poor me! 再猜一个,就赶快下车。

ate Arrow fate Question

好像一边喝着malt, 一边发呓语. 文字游戏,甘拜下风。 Wink
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