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博弈[Mark] 博弈作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
注册时间: 2006-09-24 帖子: 1484 来自: San Francisco
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发表于: 星期二 十一月 14, 2006 5:05 am 发表主题: Lake, 这首不会吓走人吧? |
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忘了那里,您说我的东西会把读者吓走,贴一首旧作赔礼。
Impressionism is my memory of thee
Impressionism is my memory of thee
as I sketch a dream over thy chin—
How can a man adore thee enough
while all the dots, words had been thine?
Yet alone I feel not, so much as a glimpse of light
shalt imprint the negative of minds,
as an enduring fire lasts the darkness-ness of nights
longing for the first dawn to ignite—
O, might I just add to thy face an accent
if not a verse, if not a stanza, if not a sentence
or a punctuation I learnt. May then, eyes wilt
move, linger, ponder who hath left a sigh here
that smells footprints of a lost poet at large.
Neo-impressionism hence is cast by thee. _________________ Sometimes I am busy
Sometimes I am free
In between, there's it
Until I find thee... |
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Lake[Lake] Lake作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
注册时间: 2006-10-10 帖子: 1341 来自: Sky Blue Water
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发表于: 星期二 十一月 14, 2006 3:04 pm 发表主题: |
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I am honoured Mr. 博弈, and spoiled at the same time.
I understand one shouldn't speed-read poems, that should be read several times and out loud.
As a matter of fact, this one is not as hard to read as your others, though still sounds classic. "Impressionism" is very well depicted in this poem. Very much enjoyed it.
Many thanks. |
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kokho[晓辉] kokho作品集 三品按察使 (天,你是斑竹吧?)
注册时间: 2006-10-25 帖子: 792 来自: Singapore
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发表于: 星期三 十一月 22, 2006 1:29 pm 发表主题: |
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楼主 真是高手 :))
。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌 |
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