酷我-北美枫

ZY

都是夜行的走兽我们一向
用冰雾的呼息在雪夜里拥抱取暖
山川里我们寻找孜孜地寻找一世幽深的池林
因那些失落的隐微总冻藏为岩穴里的冰晶
渴了只饮些花下的血，向着云角
一座高峰在记忆里白著永恒的春草
雪水就融流在我们心口的单衣

有一个午后落日将迟滞地走在我们身后
秋风泼靛橙的怀思在山峦面颊
踩著芦花飞散的丝绪，我们在山道尽头的古渡
还可以赊欠几盅宋人埋藏的女儿红
而酒意当然亦如用韵那回事
在自由和格律中我们寻找生命的步调，即使日落后
走过的山水都仍固执地送行在薄暮里送行

白水 · 发表于: 星期六十一月 05, 2005 2:49 pm 发表主题:

朋友, 可否简单介绍一下十四行诗的基本规则, 以便大家共同学习提高

杯中冲浪 · 发表于: 星期六十一月 05, 2005 5:50 pm 发表主题:

老道，拜读。
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靠近神的烛光读书

ZY · 发表于: 星期日十一月 06, 2005 8:52 am 发表主题:

多谢两位读诗了。
不好意思，我这里“十四行”，不真是讲规矩的十四行诗。
英美传统的十四行诗，有音步和用韵上的格律，大抵如下。
ZY问好杯中冲浪和白水了。

A sonnet is a fourteen-line poem in iambic pentameter with a carefully patterned rhyme scheme. Other strict, short poetic forms occur in English poetry (the sestina, the villanelle, and the haiku, for example), but none has been used so successfully by so many different poets. The Italian, or Petrarchan sonnet, named after Francesco Petrarch (1304-1374), the Italian poet, was introduced into English poetry in the early 16th century by Sir Thomas Wyatt (1503-1542). Its fourteen lines break into an octave (or octet), which usually rhymes abbaabba, but which may sometimes be abbacddc or even (rarely) abababab; and a sestet, which may rhyme xyzxyz or xyxyxy, or any of the multiple variations possible using only two or three rhyme-sounds. The English or Shakespearean sonnet, developed first by Henry Howard, Earl of Surrey (1517-1547), consists of three quatrains and a couplet--that is, it rhymes abab cdcd efef gg.

白水 · 发表于: 星期日十一月 06, 2005 10:06 am 发表主题:

thank you very much