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Blue Ice[FAFAFA] Blue Ice作品集 六品通判 (官儿做大了,保持廉洁哦)
注册时间: 2005-05-03 帖子: 146
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发表于: 星期五 七月 08, 2005 8:12 pm 发表主题: Switch |
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“Please hold your hands”
I did it, with uncertainty
“You will become a poet”
You said
You read the poems
When we walked
You asked the tree, “Are you sleep?”
You burned the flowers
Worship God
Oh! How strange a man in my head
I hid my laugh to avert you got hurts
Time went by
We met again
I told you
I never became a poet
But I like the poems so much that it is just like you have predicted
You look at me like as if looking at an eccentric woman
“What age is now? Who is still wallow in poetry?”
Did we change the chairs?
There is nothing to say when we are face to face
The moonlight is like river |
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LavenderSwing[我还没有昵称] LavenderSwing作品集 四品府丞 (封疆大吏也!)
注册时间: 2004-05-29 帖子: 321 来自: China
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发表于: 星期一 七月 11, 2005 11:44 am 发表主题: |
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You could make this a little more concise. |
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Blue Ice[FAFAFA] Blue Ice作品集 六品通判 (官儿做大了,保持廉洁哦)
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发表于: 星期二 七月 12, 2005 7:38 pm 发表主题: |
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thank you, LavenderSwing, |
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Blue Ice[FFFFFF] Blue Ice作品集 六品通判 (官儿做大了,保持廉洁哦)
注册时间: 2005-05-03 帖子: 146
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发表于: 星期二 七月 12, 2005 8:07 pm 发表主题: |
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Hi, broadstroke
thank you lots for your E-mail and your suggetions. I changed a little:
Switch
“Please hold your hands”
I did it, with uncertainty
“You will become a poet”
You said
You read the poems
When we walked
You asked the tree, “Are you asleep?”
You burned the flowers
Worship God
Oh! How strange a man in my head
I hid my laughter to avert you gotting hurt
Time went by
We met again
I told you
I never became a poet
But I like the poems so much that it is just like you have predicted
You look at me as if looking at an eccentric woman
“What age is now? Who is still wallow in poetry?”
Did we change the chairs?
There is nothing to say when we are face to face
The moonlight is like river |
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返回页首 |
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Blue Ice[FAFAFA] Blue Ice作品集 六品通判 (官儿做大了,保持廉洁哦)
注册时间: 2005-05-03 帖子: 146
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发表于: 星期三 九月 28, 2005 9:07 pm 发表主题: |
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changed a little
Switch
“Please hold out your hands”
I did it, with uncertainty
“You will become a poet”
You said
You read the poems
When we walked
You asked the tree, “Are you asleep?”
You burned the flowers
Worshiped God
Oh! How strange a man in my head
I hid my laughter to avert you getting hurt
Time went by
We met again
I told you
I never became a poet
But I like the poems so much that it is just as you have predicted
You look at me as if looking at an eccentric woman
“What age is now? Who is still wallow in poetry?”
Did we switch chairs?
There is nothing to say when we are face to face
The moonlight is like river |
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返回页首 |
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