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翻译了下面一首，准备到时朗诵，押韵尽量按照原诗，当否，请赐教：

五律－ 安大略湖

极目清波上，平湖接碧天。
沙鸥随远楫，石岸起长烟。
绿树怜投影，轻舟竞脱弦。
夕阳方落尽，回首万灯连。

Lake Ontario
Five-character classic poem

On clear wave at the end of sign,
Peaceful lake connects the blue sky.
Gulls follow with the boat far away,
Long smoke rises from rocky lakeside.
Green trees enjoy their images,
Light boats are out of bowstring fly.
Just after sunset,
Looking back and see ten thousand lights.

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翻译了下面一首，准备到时朗诵，押韵尽量按照原诗，当否，请赐教：

五律－ 安大略湖

极目清波上，平湖接碧天。
沙鸥随远楫，石岸起长烟。
绿树怜投影，轻舟竞脱弦。
夕阳方落尽，回首万灯连。

Lake Ontario
Five-character classic poem

On clear wave at the end of sign,
Peaceful lake connects the blue sky.
Gulls follow with the boat far away,
Long smoke rises from rocky lakeside.
Green trees enjoy their images,
Light boats are out of bowstring fly.
Just after sunset,
Looking back and see ten thousand lights.

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thanks Qiu Ye.

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thanks Qiu Ye.