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博弈 · 发表于: 星期四九月 01, 2011 10:40 pm 发表主题: Mary or Army

or whom the bell tolls
for what the cannon tolls
和平的鐘口細點
Mary or Army
may the soul of humanity
再細點, 再拉長一些
about where the souls stroll
a bridge has no piers
就是大砲
all stones scattered
and bodies exposed
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anna · Site Admin 注册时间: 2004-05-02 帖子: 7141

我觉得牵强了些。。。。
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博弈 · 发表于: 星期二九月 06, 2011 7:11 pm 发表主题:

嗯.
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博弈 · 发表于: 星期一九月 12, 2011 1:15 am 发表主题:

maybe I'll give it one more shot in my poetics here:

or whom the bell tolls
for what the cannon tolls

is actually read reversely

for what the cannon tolls
or whom the bell tolls

and the rest of lines in English
are also defined the same way
read the 2nd line first.

The reversing of order is a metaphor in itself.
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anna · Site Admin 注册时间: 2004-05-02 帖子: 7141

这个比第一个好！

中秋好！
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博弈 · 发表于: 星期一九月 12, 2011 10:01 pm 发表主题:

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