酷我-北美枫

[非马]

未干的画


你墨迹未干的那幅
画
我取走了

它让我忆起
某个异国黄昏
我们携手走出的
雨后风景

我的书房光线不足
正需要一面
能观看风景的
窗


A WET PAINTING

I took your painting
not yet dry

it reminded me of the scenery
where we emerged
hand-in-hand
years ago in a faraway land
after a day's rain

my dim study room
needs a window
with a picturesque view

[[FAFAFA]]

未干的画


你墨迹未干的那幅
画
我取走了

它让我忆起
某个异国黄昏
我们携手走出的
雨后风景

我的书房光线不足
正需要一面
能观看风景的
窗


A WET PAINTING

I took your painting
not yet dry

it reminded me of the scenery
where we emerged
hand-in-hand
years ago in a faraway land
after a day's rain

my dim study room
needs a window
with a picturesque view

[anna]

the dim study in my house

How about

my dim study room


----I feel the ending is too telling... may be better to leave out some words....
_________________
---------------------

Anna Yin

《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
<Nightlights> <Seven Nights with the Chinese Zodiac> ...

http://annapoetry.com

[[星子安娜]]

the dim study in my house

How about

my dim study room


----I feel the ending is too telling... may be better to leave out some words....
_________________
---------------------

Anna Yin

《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
<Nightlights> <Seven Nights with the Chinese Zodiac> ...

http://annapoetry.com

[非马]

[[FAFAFA]]