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Blue Ice · 发表于: 星期四六月 09, 2005 7:42 pm 发表主题: Fire Bird

Fire Bird

Why do you cry like a lion?
Why do you cut like a scissors?
Are you sure that you want to stop something now?
You threw the junk paper in the fire
Oh! I get you
You are like a beautiful bird fly from the red stove
I know you will leave soon
But the wonderful flash will enlighten my life

Ice Tea

I put ice in a cup of hot tea
Watching it vanish in the water
Let her go, my cold and beautiful friend
The tea is still the tea
But, wait a moment
Where is the steam on the cup?
Has it gone?
The steam is my dream.

The Book

I had a book
It was a wonderful book
But I have never read it
Because I always thought it belongs to me
One day, I lost the book
and could never find it
I cried and cried until I got so tired
The book came back, in my sweet dream
I wanted to hold it
But the book disappeared again

LavenderSwing · 发表于: 星期四六月 09, 2005 9:23 pm 发表主题:

I had a book
, a wonderful book
But I have never read it--
thought it belonging to me.
One day, I lost it
and never found it

---------I guess you can end like this

Blue Ice · 发表于: 星期五六月 10, 2005 9:02 pm 发表主题:

Thanks LavenderSwing, I changed a litter.

(1) Fire Bird

Why do you cry like a lion?
Why do you cut like a scissors?
Are you sure that you want to stop something now?
You threw the junk paper in the fire
Oh! I get you
You are like a beautiful bird fly from the red stove
I know you will leave soon
But the wonderful flash will enlighten my life

(2) Ice Tea

I put ice in a cup of hot tea
Watching it vanish in the water
Let her go, my cold and beautiful friend
The tea is still the tea
But, wait a moment

Where is the steam on the cup?
Has it gone?
The steam is my dream.

(3) The Book

I had a book
It was a wonderful book
But I have never read it --
always thought it belongs to me
One day, I lost the book
and never find it

I cried and cried until I got so tired
The book came back, in my sweet dream
I wanted to hold it
But the book disappeared again

broadstroke · 发表于: 星期一六月 20, 2005 4:35 pm 发表主题: Fire Bird

I like it. Your English is getting better.

broadstroke · 发表于: 星期一六月 20, 2005 4:39 pm 发表主题: Ice Tea

It would appear that the ice has joined the tea. To become one.

Blue Ice · 发表于: 星期三六月 22, 2005 10:12 pm 发表主题:

broadstroke, Thank you for your encouragement and I wish you to point out my weaknesses