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anna[星子安娜]
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 发表于: 星期三 五月 19, 2010 9:57 pm 发表主题: Naming a Bird (hidden) |
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anna[星子安娜]
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| 发表于: 星期三 五月 19, 2010 9:59 pm 发表主题: |
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Just read a line from an article, Name a Cat...
So I thought of Name a Bird, I wrote a poem for Cat before, so I wanted to combine two into one poem. Just for fun.
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星子[ANNA]
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酷我！I made it！
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| 发表于: 星期一 五月 24, 2010 8:34 am 发表主题: |
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这首写得很凌乱。。。要大改。思考中。
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二品总督
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| 不太明白“Pussy Cat, Tiger for a bird?” 的意思 |
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anna[星子安娜]
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| 发表于: 星期三 五月 26, 2010 9:21 am 发表主题: |
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Thanks 非马's reading and question.
This one I tried to write to reflect our self-images in two lovers with their dialogues and conflict.
In this poem, there are two lovers, you and I.
and I tried to name the bird: Tiger.
You laughed at me: "Pussy Cat" too silly to name a bird: Tiger
So I recalled that name I gave to the real pet: Cat, Miss Queen. With this title, she could escape from your cage.
So now I name the bird: Tiger. The same power could turn down your bait.
In the end, you are in the shadow...
(I know these thoughts are good, but haven't developed fully in this poem. So I need to work it on. Thanks)
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