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[非马]

芝加哥

在原始森林
就在毕卡索的
怪兽下
假寐

混沌里
一声拖得长长的
TIM---BER---
把我惊醒

抬头
却见参天的
大厦
在漏下的夕阳里
似乎又倾斜了几度



CHICAGO

dozing off
in the virgin forest
beneath the feet
of Picasso’s strange animal
when suddenly a long yell
TIM --- BER ---
awakens me

I raise my head
and in the sunlight that leaks through
I see the skyscrapers
all slanting towards me




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芝加哥

在原始森林
就在毕卡索的
怪兽下
假寐

混沌里
一声拖得长长的
TIM---BER---
把我惊醒

抬头
却见参天的
大厦
在漏下的夕阳里
似乎又倾斜了几度



CHICAGO

dozing off
in the virgin forest
beneath the feet
of Picasso’s strange animal
when suddenly a long yell
TIM --- BER ---
awakens me

I raise my head
and in the sunlight that leaks through
I see the skyscrapers
all slanting towards me




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[anna]

Hi Willliam,

I like this poem.

It raises a question, why Timber? Because of the forest is lost and the steel buildings replace it?

I noticed 毕卡索 and 芝加哥 almost share the same sound. Nice.

Human in the modern city longs for the virgin greenness.
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Anna Yin

《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
<Nightlights> <Seven Nights with the Chinese Zodiac> ...

http://annapoetry.com

[[星子安娜]]

Hi Willliam,

I like this poem.

It raises a question, why Timber? Because of the forest is lost and the steel buildings replace it?

I noticed 毕卡索 and 芝加哥 almost share the same sound. Nice.

Human in the modern city longs for the virgin greenness.
_________________
---------------------

Anna Yin

《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
<Nightlights> <Seven Nights with the Chinese Zodiac> ...

http://annapoetry.com