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Change I need (different from Obama’s Hope Commodity)

 
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帖子发表于: 星期日 十一月 02, 2008 9:51 am    发表主题: Change I need (different from Obama’s Hope Commodity) 引用并回复

Change I need (different from Obama’s Hope Commodity, short-short)


In the 1932 election, I voted for Franklin D. Roosevelt. Again, he got my vote in 1936, 1940, and 1944. After that, his name was no longer on the ballot, so I simply wrote his name down and voted for him anyway. My friends all thought I was nuts and lived in the long-gone past. But, in subsequent elections as I looked at the presidential candidates and their policy platforms, I saw no reason to give up my duty to vote responsibly. We are Americans and we want the best man, not a lesser good or evil man, as our President. Being a man of principle, I stood firm in my convictions and continued to vote for the best man.

Then in the 1960 election, my friends, this time including my talkative wife, eagerly appealed to my fear of where our country was headed. Their truly patriotic, not partisan, attitudes made me to think about whom was the best man this time and place. It was time to change, so I voted for John F. Kennedy for my president.

Of course, I was still a man of principle and never forgot my duty. I continued to pencil out the names on the ballot and kept voting for John F. Kennedy for my president. My friends, surely including my ex-wife, thought I was incurably nuts and snared by the haunting past. But, I still stood firm because of my sense of duty.

But now this year, 2008, they have been appealing to my fear of not only where our country is going to be headed, but also where my pension and house will be in the next few months, or maybe weeks. Our country is at a crossroads and we need change! Once again, I've been forced to rethink my choice for president. Doubtless, it is my duty!

Now, I’m on my way to the voting booth, and this time I’ll write in Martin Luther King and vote for him for my president. This is the change I need. I'm humming to myself along the way to the booth:

God Bless America,
Land that I love.
Stand beside her, and guide her
Thru the night with a light from above.
From the mountains, to the prairies,
To the oceans, white with foam
God bless America, My home sweet home.
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帖子发表于: 星期日 十一月 02, 2008 1:13 pm    发表主题: Re: Change I need (short-short) 引用并回复

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Now, I’m on my way to the voting booth, and this time I’ll write in the name Martin Luther King for my president. This is the change I need. I'm humming to myself along the way to the booth:



Oh, what a piece of satirical writing! Really take a hard look at "Change We Need."
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帖子发表于: 星期日 十一月 02, 2008 11:08 pm    发表主题: 引用并回复

"Change I need", sure everyone wants a change, but it's hard to tell who will make the change you need. The person I voted didn't get to the office, the person I voted disappointed me. Do I need to vote again this year? Will it make a difference?
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帖子发表于: 星期一 十一月 03, 2008 10:54 pm    发表主题: Re: Change I need (short-short) 引用并回复

christine 写到:


Oh, what a piece of satirical writing! Really take a hard look at "Change We Need."


Yes. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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帖子发表于: 星期一 十一月 03, 2008 11:00 pm    发表主题: 引用并回复

Lake 写到:
"Change I need", sure everyone wants a change, but it's hard to tell who will make the change you need.



The change you mentioned in your reply is the Change We (constituency) Need (Obama-esque change).

The change in the penultimate paragraph is the change made by each individual voter. That' s why the narrator of my story will write in the name Martin Luther King.

Lake, thanks for the read and sharing your thoughts.
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帖子发表于: 星期二 十一月 04, 2008 2:11 pm    发表主题: 引用并回复

I laughed and loved this one.

Champagne 写到:


I looked at these presidential candidates and their policy platforms, if they had a good one, seeing no reason to give up my pursuit of “statement”: we are Americans and we want the best man, not a lesser good or evil, as our President. I was a man of principle and I had stood firm on my stance in this politically conscientious issue over almost three decades.



The repetition -- "I was a man of principle and I had stood firm on my stance in this politically conscientious issue" -- and its variants make a strong emotional impack on the mind of its reader.

Yes, keep Dr. King's dream alive.
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帖子发表于: 星期二 十一月 04, 2008 8:40 pm    发表主题: 引用并回复

温暖的水獸 写到:


Yes, keep Dr. King's dream alive.


Yes, you grasp the key point of my story.
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帖子发表于: 星期四 十一月 06, 2008 10:04 am    发表主题: 引用并回复

温暖的水獸 写到:


Yes, keep Dr. King's dream alive.


Barack Obama has won the US presidential election, and in my view, it represents that we can aspire to things that we want to without being held back because of our colour, which means Dr. King's dream is alive and beginning to be gradually realized.
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帖子发表于: 星期五 十一月 07, 2008 4:45 pm    发表主题: 引用并回复

Yes.

The crowd roared
fists in the air
for hope and change.
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帖子发表于: 星期六 十一月 08, 2008 1:58 pm    发表主题: 引用并回复

christine 写到:


温暖的水獸 写到:


Yes, keep Dr. King's dream alive.


Barack Obama has won the US presidential election, and in my view, it represents that we can aspire to things that we want to without being held back because of our colour, which means Dr. King's dream is alive and beginning to be gradually realized.


Yes, I agree with both of you.

The following is an excerpt from an article published by The Toronto Star:

"On Tuesday evening as a huge Chicago crowd waited for Barrack Obama to appear, the cameras panned to civil rights activist Jesse Jackson, tears streaming down his face. The next morning on CNN, former secretary of state Colin Powell also teared up as he discussed Obama's victory.

Either Jackson and Powell might have been the first African-American president and their tears symbolized the joys of justice and reconciliation as America conclusively turned the page on the historical tragedy of slavery."

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帖子发表于: 星期四 十一月 27, 2008 6:40 pm    发表主题: 引用并回复

浴恩福 写到:


fists in the air
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Now, it's the same group of old men who will make the "change" we need.

A twist ending!
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帖子发表于: 星期六 二月 07, 2009 9:34 am    发表主题: 引用并回复

Below is an excerpt from a New York Time piece entitled Tough Times at Obama Inc. by GAIL COLLINS:


“I know it’s been a tough week, little Obamaites. You’ve been feeling ... unstimulated.

But think of it this way — the drama in the Senate drove Tom Daschle completely out of the news. In a week or so, nobody will even remember that he was nominated for anything.

Perk up and feel free to ask questions:

How could so many cabinet nominees get into trouble? The Obama transition team was supposed to be so organized! Did their seven-page questionnaire ask about Facebook pages but not tax liens?
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