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hahaview[hahaview] hahaview作品集 六品通判 (官儿做大了,保持廉洁哦)
注册时间: 2008-02-07 帖子: 103
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发表于: 星期一 十一月 17, 2008 9:18 am 发表主题: Duly Commissioned Reports |
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Duly Commissioned Reports
Commission reports published in years past
on violence, justice, education,
poverty, racism, or what have you ...
were duly commissioned, researched, printed,
delivered, debated, or what have you ...
now filed away, ignored.
Note:
Commission Reports is my “rewrite” of an article published by The Toronto Star on the report concerning the roots of youth violence delivered last week by Roy McMurtry and Alvin Curling. _________________ I came, I saw, and I conquered
最后进行编辑的是 hahaview on 星期日 十二月 14, 2008 8:58 am, 总计第 2 次编辑 |
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christine[christine] christine作品集 四品府丞 (封疆大吏也!)
注册时间: 2008-02-25 帖子: 304
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发表于: 星期一 十一月 17, 2008 11:49 am 发表主题: |
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You take a sarcastic and contemptuous tone in the poem.
I enjoyed reading your poem. |
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温暖的水獸[温暖的水獸] 温暖的水獸作品集 五品知州 (再努力一把就是四品大员了!)
注册时间: 2008-04-23 帖子: 153 来自: 水族箱
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发表于: 星期一 十一月 17, 2008 1:16 pm 发表主题: |
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hahaview 写到: |
Commission Reports
Commission reports published in years past
on violence, justice, education,
poverty, racism, or what have you ...
were duly commissioned, researched, printed,
delivered, debated, or what have you ...
and eventually ignored.
Note:
Commission Reports is my “rewrite” of an article published by The Toronto Star on the report concerning the roots of youth violence delivered last week by Roy McMurtry and Alvin Curling. |
christine 写到: |
You take a sarcastic and contemptuous tone in the poem.
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Indeed. It's because this report is bulky (5-volume), expensive (2 millions), and eventually useless. _________________ 舌頭那匹温暖的水獸 馴養地在小小的水族箱中 蠕動
那獸說:是的 我願意 |
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hahaview[hahaview] hahaview作品集 六品通判 (官儿做大了,保持廉洁哦)
注册时间: 2008-02-07 帖子: 103
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发表于: 星期二 十一月 18, 2008 8:26 am 发表主题: |
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温暖的水獸 写到: |
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You take a sarcastic and contemptuous tone in the poem.
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Indeed. It's because this report is bulky (5-volume), expensive (2 millions), and eventually useless. |
Yes. I'm happy that both of you grasped the main ideas behind the poem.
Deep inside my heart, I hope this report could do something beneficiary to the marginalized youth. _________________ I came, I saw, and I conquered |
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fanfan[FAFAFA] fanfan作品集 四品府丞 (封疆大吏也!)
注册时间: 2007-12-27 帖子: 353 来自: Canada
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发表于: 星期二 十一月 18, 2008 10:00 pm 发表主题: Re: Commission Reports |
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Commission Reports
Commission reports published in years past
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poverty, racism, or what have you ...
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Ha! Ha! A gradual revelation!? _________________ Don't imitate me;
it's as boring
as the two halves of a melon. |
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hahaview[hahaview] hahaview作品集 六品通判 (官儿做大了,保持廉洁哦)
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发表于: 星期三 十一月 19, 2008 11:53 am 发表主题: Re: Commission Reports |
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Ha! Ha! A gradual revelation!? |
Did this revelation make any significant impacts on the lives of people who desperately need help?
By the way, I changed the title of my poem. _________________ I came, I saw, and I conquered |
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浴恩福[浴恩福] 浴恩福作品集 六品通判 (官儿做大了,保持廉洁哦)
注册时间: 2008-05-08 帖子: 123 来自: 多倫多
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发表于: 星期五 十一月 21, 2008 1:32 pm 发表主题: Re: Commission Reports |
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hahaview 写到: |
By the way, I changed the title of my poem. |
hahaview 写到: |
Duly Commissioned Reports
Commission reports published in years past
on violence, justice, education,
poverty, racism, or what have you ...
were duly commissioned, researched, printed,
delivered, debated, or what have you ...
and eventually ignored.
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Yes, the change and repetition made the tone more "sarcastic and contemptuous." _________________ 報三恩、耕三大福田 |
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hahaview[hahaview] hahaview作品集 六品通判 (官儿做大了,保持廉洁哦)
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发表于: 星期日 十二月 14, 2008 8:57 am 发表主题: |
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Thanks for your thoughtful comments.
I've revised my poem. _________________ I came, I saw, and I conquered |
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川生[川生] 川生作品集 七品按察司 (我开始管这里的事儿了)
注册时间: 2008-09-18 帖子: 72
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发表于: 星期四 十二月 18, 2008 5:41 pm 发表主题: Re: Duly Commissioned Reports |
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Duly Commissioned Reports
Commission reports published in years past
on violence, justice, education,
poverty, racism, or what have you ...
were duly commissioned, researched, printed,
delivered, debated, or what have you ...
now filed away, ignored.
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The marked phrases are the key to understanding the "sarcastic and contemptuous" tone of the poem.
Is this written in the form of sevenling? _________________ Lines go off in all directions. |
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