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[anna]

[[星子安娜]]

[anna]

I copy comments from cutting forum, since many of them just keep a few months. but here, I can keep them much longer. (thanks for their comments for that I know this piece is valuable)

anna,

this is lovely

very lovely and perfectedly executed

Dorothy

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Mildly surreal...disjointed,
perfectly captures
a grieving state of mind.

I remember you well
from TCP; how hard you worked
to improve your craft,
and my, how it shows here so well.

THIS:
My world
slips into words
without you
is SO powerful,

but the subtle sadness
of the final lines...not knowing/caring
whether it be one bird or a flock
singing in the dawn...brilliant.

Live, love, laugh & be happy,
Smikes
_________________
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Anna Yin

《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
<Nightlights> <Seven Nights with the Chinese Zodiac> ...

http://annapoetry.com

[[星子安娜]]

I copy comments from cutting forum, since many of them just keep a few months. but here, I can keep them much longer. (thanks for their comments for that I know this piece is valuable)

anna,

this is lovely

very lovely and perfectedly executed

Dorothy

---------------

Mildly surreal...disjointed,
perfectly captures
a grieving state of mind.

I remember you well
from TCP; how hard you worked
to improve your craft,
and my, how it shows here so well.

THIS:
My world
slips into words
without you
is SO powerful,

but the subtle sadness
of the final lines...not knowing/caring
whether it be one bird or a flock
singing in the dawn...brilliant.

Live, love, laugh & be happy,
Smikes
_________________
---------------------

Anna Yin

《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
<Nightlights> <Seven Nights with the Chinese Zodiac> ...

http://annapoetry.com