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All about him (Assigment #7)

 
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帖子发表于: 星期六 七月 05, 2008 12:02 pm    发表主题: All about him (Assigment #7) 引用并回复

Her happiness is making him happy? She pauses and resents the thought. Is she pretty and lovely? Sure. Better to be. All his possession, his brand. And even the Title: his lady!
What is left? Now he is not home, she does feel the leisure of freedom, the beauty of self-determination, temporary and false, aching a void… What about her?

He is on his way home, thinking of her - his lover - his pride. He could still feel her smooth skin and her graceful warmth. He could smell her smile and his pure rapture. Two more days until Valentine’s, he has prepared a set of Tiffany diamonds for her. A whole match for her. How happy she would be. How lucky she would feel. She could have everything she wants as he tells her. Name it, sport car, fashion, pets…grand house, world travel. She could not be more content. Few women could afford what she has. Money is everything. Isn’t it?

The mirror reflects her flawless face. Tonight she is supposed to accompany him to attend another important event. Important, the word hurts her. Behind it, she smells MONEY. And She is expected to put on the wealth too! That is the label of Him and Her!
She wishes to escape.

Thinking of tonight, he cannot help smiling. How beautiful she will be. How proud and happy they will be there. It is another grand show case for them. And Money talks, Money shines! His head lifts up.
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I concern about the tense again, will come back to revise it soon.

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