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clair[clair] clair作品集 七品按察司 (我开始管这里的事儿了)
注册时间: 2008-03-13 帖子: 83
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发表于: 星期四 五月 01, 2008 2:47 pm 发表主题: Silence Is a Looking Bird |
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Silence Is a Looking Bird co-authored by ericcoliu
In my view, the most challenging part of a poet’s work is to name the unnameable and articulate the unspoken or unspeakable. Silence is such a poetic realm worthy of further exploration and even transgression of the boundaries of imagination. In his succinct and intense poem below,
silence
.is
a
looking
bird:the
turn
ing;edge, of
life
(inquiry before snow
E. E. Cummings tackles this challenging subject by defining it through two vivid images: “the looking bird” and “the turning edge of life.” The first image signifies the potentiality of the unactualized voice and its underlying metaphor that has been displaced is that of the singing bird. The second one refers to the unimaginable passage where speech turns into speechlessness. These two images are beyond conventional representation. Is a looking bird still a bird? And can the turning edge of life be called a life? He works hard on the limits of literary representation and tries to pin down the elusive nature of his escaping subject.
Still, silence, Cummings humbly admits, partly resists definition because of its self-sufficiency as the punctuation mark, a period, at the beginning of the second line clearly demonstrates. Written in his innovative sentence structure, silence in itself is a sentence that hardly needs any verb. To further explore the unheard and express the unspoken, he resorts to the eye and points out the analogy between silence and snow, two words that begin and end with the poem. The last line, “(inquiry before snow,” is left out a closing parenthesis and followed by a huge blank, loudly announcing a white downpour, a visual snow that covers the rest of the page. This literary device is similar to a Chinese painting method, "leaving blank” (liu bai in Chinese), with which artists may leave the background blank to enhance the impact in order to emphasize a particular subject. Silence is made visible on the page by the surrounding blank space. If silence is the unspoken by definition, through the reader’s imagination, silence can be experienced visually on the page. To some extent, this poem is not only textual but also visual, and Cummings skilfully enables the reader to decipher the mute hieroglyphs of the page and to turn them into speech. Silence is a looking bird, which can realize its potentiality of singing beautiful songs through imagination. _________________ This dark
Ceiling without a star
最后进行编辑的是 clair on 星期五 二月 04, 2011 11:06 am, 总计第 1 次编辑 |
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robarts[robarts] robarts作品集 六品通判 (官儿做大了,保持廉洁哦)
注册时间: 2008-03-24 帖子: 114 来自: Canada
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发表于: 星期四 五月 01, 2008 3:05 pm 发表主题: Re: Silence Is a Looking Bird |
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clair 写到: |
Silence is made visible on the page by the surrounding blank space. If silence is the unspoken by definition, through the reader’s imagination, silence can be experienced visually on the page. To some extent, this poem is not only textual but also visual, and Cummings skilfully enables the reader to decipher the mute hieroglyphs of the page and to turn them into speech. Silence is a looking bird, which can realize its potentiality of singing beautiful songs through imagination. |
A good review.
In his poem, silence, at least to me, is materially made visible on the page by being identified with the surrounding blank space. _________________ If one cannot enjoy reading a book over and over again, there is no use in reading it at all. |
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dundas[dundas] dundas作品集 五品知州 (再努力一把就是四品大员了!)
注册时间: 2008-02-23 帖子: 214
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发表于: 星期四 五月 01, 2008 3:42 pm 发表主题: Re: Silence Is a Looking Bird |
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clair 写到: |
silence
.is
a
looking
bird:
The first image signifies the potentiality of the unactualized voice and its underlying metaphor that has been displaced is that of the singing bird. |
Good point. I like the "looking bird" metaphor.
Maybe displacement is one of few possible ways to expresse silence. _________________ My throat knew thirst before the structure
Of skin and vein around the well |
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ericcoliu[ericcoliu] ericcoliu作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
注册时间: 2007-05-29 帖子: 1393 来自: GTA, Canada
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发表于: 星期五 五月 02, 2008 9:42 am 发表主题: Re: Silence Is a Looking Bird |
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clair 写到: | Silence Is a Looking Bird
He works hard on the limits of literary representation and tries to pin down the elusive nature of his escaping subject.
Still, silence, Cummings humbly admits, partly resists definition because of its self-sufficiency as the punctuation mark, a period, at the beginning of the second line clearly demonstrates. Written in his innovative sentence structure, silence in itself is a sentence that hardly needs any verb.. |
In my view, the true spirit of this poem is close to that of Japanese haiku.
The "intrusive" insertion of “is” between “a period” and “a looking bird” explains the relationship between the bird and its quietness. _________________ Time is nothing but a disquiet of the soul |
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christine[christine] christine作品集 四品府丞 (封疆大吏也!)
注册时间: 2008-02-25 帖子: 304
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发表于: 星期六 五月 03, 2008 12:19 pm 发表主题: Re: Silence Is a Looking Bird |
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dundas 写到: |
clair 写到: |
silence
.is
a
looking
bird:
The first image signifies the potentiality of the unactualized voice and its underlying metaphor that has been displaced is that of the singing bird. |
Good point. I like the "looking bird" metaphor.
Maybe displacement is one of few possible ways to expresse silence. |
Yes, a good point.
In E. E. Cummings' another poem, enter no, on silence,
enter no(silence is the blood whose flesh
is singing)silence:but unsinging. In
spectral such hugest how hush,one
dead leaf stirring makes a crash
-far away(as far as alive)lies
april;and i breathe-move-and-seem some
perpetually roaming whylessness-
autumn has gone:will winter never come?
o come,terrible anonymity;enfold
phantom me with the murdering minus of cold
-open this ghost with millionary knives of wind-
scatter his nothing all over what angry skies and
gently
(very whiteness:absolute peace,
never imaginable mystery)
descend
He articulates the dynamic relationship between silence and "unsingingness." Now, "a looking bird" (silence), which literally means a unsinging bird, makes it possible to understand why he chooses the adjective "unsinging." |
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温暖的水獸[温暖的水獸] 温暖的水獸作品集 五品知州 (再努力一把就是四品大员了!)
注册时间: 2008-04-23 帖子: 153 来自: 水族箱
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发表于: 星期一 五月 05, 2008 12:48 pm 发表主题: Re: Silence Is a Looking Bird |
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clair 写到: |
To further explore the unheard and express the unspoken, he resorts to the eye and points out the analogy between silence and snow, two words that begin and end with the poem. The last line, “(inquiry before snow,” is left out a closing parenthesis and followed by a huge blank, loudly announcing a white downpour, a visual snow that covers the rest of the page. This literary device is similar to a Chinese painting method, "leaving blank” (liu bai in Chinese), with which artists may leave the background blank to enhance the impact in order to emphasize a particular subject. Silence is made visible on the page by the surrounding blank space. |
A good point.
I know E. E. Cummings is not only a poet but also a painter. Maybe he learned something about "leaving blank" from Chinese brush painting. It seems to me that the conception of silence apparently plays a decisive role in Cummings’ aesthetics. _________________ 舌頭那匹温暖的水獸 馴養地在小小的水族箱中 蠕動
那獸說:是的 我願意 |
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clair[clair] clair作品集 七品按察司 (我开始管这里的事儿了)
注册时间: 2008-03-13 帖子: 83
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发表于: 星期二 五月 13, 2008 11:34 am 发表主题: Re: Silence Is a Looking Bird |
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Thank you all for your comments, which encourage me greatly.
ericcoliu 写到: |
In my view, the true spirit of this poem is close to that of Japanese haiku.
The "intrusive" insertion of “is” between “a period” and “a looking bird” explains the relationship between the bird and its quietness. |
Cummings scholar Michael Dylan Welch wrote an essay, titled THE HAIKU SENSIBILITIES OF E. E. CUMMINGS , to explore the overlap of haiku with the poetry of E. E. Cummings, who is one of few Western poets who have given their attentive ears to the Japanese poetry of silence. _________________ This dark
Ceiling without a star |
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clair[clair] clair作品集 七品按察司 (我开始管这里的事儿了)
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发表于: 星期二 五月 13, 2008 11:40 am 发表主题: Re: Silence Is a Looking Bird |
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christine 写到: |
In E. E. Cummings' another poem, enter no, on silence,
enter no(silence is the blood whose flesh
is singing)silence:but unsinging. In
spectral such hugest how hush,one
dead leaf stirring makes a crash
-far away(as far as alive)lies
april;and i breathe-move-and-seem some
perpetually roaming whylessness-
autumn has gone:will winter never come?
o come,terrible anonymity;enfold
phantom me with the murdering minus of cold
-open this ghost with millionary knives of wind-
scatter his nothing all over what angry skies and
gently
(very whiteness:absolute peace,
never imaginable mystery)
descend
He articulates the dynamic relationship between silence and "unsingingness." Now, "a looking bird" (silence), which literally means a unsinging bird, makes it possible to understand why he chooses the adjective "unsinging." |
Yes, he didn't choose "unsinging" lightly.
When he was a college student at Harvard University, he once wrote an essay to discuss one of defining characteristics of Japanese poetry: silence, which has become one of his favourite conceits _________________ This dark
Ceiling without a star |
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