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		非马[FAFAFA] 非马作品集  二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
  
 
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				 发表于: 星期四 三月 27, 2008 7:56 pm    发表主题: A DARK HORSE | 
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				A DARK HORSE
 
 
not a single hair
 
is unbecoming
 
no particle of dust
 
clings to its polished eyes
 
 
if not for the glistening nose
 
and the rousing mane 
 
you probably cannot tell
 
that it has just run all the way
 
from the depth 
 
of a night dream | 
			 
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		ericcoliu[ericcoliu] ericcoliu作品集  二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
  
 
  注册时间: 2007-05-29 帖子: 1393 来自: GTA, Canada
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				 发表于: 星期四 三月 27, 2008 10:40 pm    发表主题: Re: A DARK HORSE | 
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A DARK HORSE
 
 
you probably cannot tell
 
that it has just run all the way
 
from the depth 
 
of a night dream | 	  
 
 
Turning the nightmare into a “night-mare". _________________ Time is nothing but a disquiet of the soul | 
			 
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		Lake[Lake] Lake作品集  二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
  
 
  注册时间: 2006-10-10 帖子: 1341 来自: Sky Blue Water
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				 发表于: 星期四 三月 27, 2008 11:38 pm    发表主题:  | 
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				| Another gem,  I would say. | 
			 
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		非马[FFFFFF] 非马作品集  二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
  
 
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				| Thank you, Eric & Lake.  As always, it's a pleasure to read your responses to my poem. | 
			 
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