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Two Stages of a Frostian Choice


ahead, two paths diverged
in the woods --
journeying was hard

a fork in the forest
take it. yet be cautious --
deja vu all over again


The Roads I Have Traveled by ericcoliu


ahead, two roads diverged
in the dim woods --
the journey's been long

arriving at the fork
once again, I chose the road less traveled --
deja vu
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報三恩、耕三大福田

[[浴恩福]]

Two Stages of a Frostian Choice


ahead, two paths diverged
in the woods --
journeying was hard

a fork in the forest
take it. yet be cautious --
deja vu all over again


The Roads I Have Traveled by ericcoliu


ahead, two roads diverged
in the dim woods --
the journey's been long

arriving at the fork
once again, I chose the road less traveled --
deja vu
_________________
報三恩、耕三大福田

[ericcoliu]

It's a good allusion to Frost's The Road Less Taken and at the same time skillfully comments on it:


Two roads diverged in a yellow wood,
And sorry I could not travel both
And be one traveller, long I stood
And looked down one as far as I could
To where it bent in the undergrowth;

Then took the other, as just as fair,
And having perhaps the better claim,
Because it was grassy and wanted wear;
Though as for that the passing there
Had worn them really about the same,

And both that morning equally lay
In leaves no step had trodden black.
Oh, I kept the first for another day!
Yet knowing how way leads on to way,
I doubted if I should ever come back.

I shall be telling this with a sigh
Somewhere ages and ages hence:
Two roads diverged in a wood, and I--
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference

...Robert Frost

By the way, there are grammatical errors in your poem.
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Time is nothing but a disquiet of the soul

[[ericcoliu]]

It's a good allusion to Frost's The Road Less Taken and at the same time skillfully comments on it:


Two roads diverged in a yellow wood,
And sorry I could not travel both
And be one traveller, long I stood
And looked down one as far as I could
To where it bent in the undergrowth;

Then took the other, as just as fair,
And having perhaps the better claim,
Because it was grassy and wanted wear;
Though as for that the passing there
Had worn them really about the same,

And both that morning equally lay
In leaves no step had trodden black.
Oh, I kept the first for another day!
Yet knowing how way leads on to way,
I doubted if I should ever come back.

I shall be telling this with a sigh
Somewhere ages and ages hence:
Two roads diverged in a wood, and I--
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference

...Robert Frost

By the way, there are grammatical errors in your poem.
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Time is nothing but a disquiet of the soul

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Two different takes on Frost's poem.

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Two different takes on Frost's poem.

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