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Champagne[Champagne]
Champagne作品集
四品府丞
（封疆大吏也！）
注册时间: 2007-09-15
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来自: Nowhere & Everywhere
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 发表于: 星期四 二月 14, 2008 8:45 am 发表主题: The Touching (Sudden Fiction) |
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I'm Champagne,
Bottled poetry with sparkling joy.
最后进行编辑的是 Champagne on 星期日 三月 21, 2010 8:16 pm, 总计第 1 次编辑 |
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hahaview[hahaview]
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六品通判
（官儿做大了，保持廉洁哦）
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| 发表于: 星期四 二月 14, 2008 10:25 am 发表主题: Re: The Touching (Sudden Fiction) |
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The Touching *
you know I’m naked under this bikini suit, don’t you”
“Don’t close your eyes. You have large, gentle hands.”
The expression of arousal on her face had vanished.
At this moment, Wasaga Beach had been witness to his first love.
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Ha! Ha! The Touching is neither The Touch nor The Arousing. I'm really getting into, between, and beneath the touching.
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I came, I saw, and I conquered |
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Lake[Lake]
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二品总督
（刚入二品，小心做人）
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来自: Sky Blue Water
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| 发表于: 星期四 二月 14, 2008 4:15 pm 发表主题: |
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| very erotic. |
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Champagne[Champagne]
Champagne作品集
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| 发表于: 星期四 二月 14, 2008 11:22 pm 发表主题: Re: The Touching (Sudden Fiction) |
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Thank hahaview and Lake for reading my piece.
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Ha! Ha! The Touching is neither The Touch nor The Arousing. I'm really getting into, between, and beneath the touching.
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Yes, The Touching is not The Touch.
You're really getting into my piece.
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redshoe[redshoe]
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九品县令
（一不小心，做了官儿了。）
注册时间: 2008-02-13
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| 发表于: 星期六 二月 16, 2008 1:42 pm 发表主题: Re: The Touching (Sudden Fiction) |
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| Champagne 写到: | The Touching *
She continued her query, “When you watch me through your digital camera, do you do it on your own?”
Unexpectedly, he felt embarrassed and answered with a little lower voice, “I used to… a long time ago. I, I, …, I don’t do it any more. I only think about you, and I want to be with you.”
With a soft voice, she said, “Think about me now… you know I’m naked under this bikini suit, don’t you”
He lowered his head, and she continued,
“When a woman wants a man, she gets all wet inside… do you want to see if I am now?”
Without his consent, she took his right hand, and placed it under her bikini suit. He could feel her thighs.
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It's a foreplay for her . game.
The Touching is The arousing of desire in the first place and then the fatal touch of shattering the illusion of love.
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Champagne[Champagne]
Champagne作品集
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来自: Nowhere & Everywhere
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| 发表于: 星期一 二月 18, 2008 12:24 pm 发表主题: Re: The Touching (Sudden Fiction) |
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It's a foreplay for her "S E X" game.
The Touching is The arousing of desire in the first place and then the fatal touch of shattering the illusion of love. |
Hi! redshoe:
You're the first person to catch this "foreplay" description. Good for you. Not polluted by Confucius' outmoded teaching on morality and sexuality.
By the way, when you want to key in "s e x " or any "s e x"-related words next time, you just type in words as the way as I do now.
Now You see a good example illustrating the consequences of Confucius' outmoded teaching on morality and sexuality which blinds the eyes of modulators for this website.
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