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非马[FAFAFA]
非马作品集
二品总督
（刚入二品，小心做人）
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 发表于: 星期日 十一月 11, 2007 11:42 am 发表主题: 梦之图案 (双语) |
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梦之图案
──黄石公园游记之四
太阳一下山
潜伏林中的野兽
便推挤著涌向林边
把闪闪发光的眼睛
嵌入
枝与叶间的空隙
美丽的
梦之图案
蠢蠢欲
腾空而去
EVENING AT YELLOWSTONE
Right after sundown
the animals in hiding
all rush to the edge of the woods
and set their twinkling eyes
in the openings
among the leaves and branches
A beautiful dream design is waiting
waiting for the call of the first star
to soar
into the evening sky |
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戴玨[Edgar]
戴玨作品集
五品知州
（再努力一把就是四品大员了！）
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星子[ANNA]
星子作品集
酷我！I made it！
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来自: Toronto
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| 发表于: 星期日 十一月 11, 2007 3:31 pm 发表主题: |
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I like the first verse.
The second is too abstract.
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ericcoliu[ericcoliu]
ericcoliu作品集
二品总督
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注册时间: 2007-05-29
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来自: GTA, Canada
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| 发表于: 星期日 十一月 11, 2007 6:26 pm 发表主题: |
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I like the English version of your poem, especially the second stanza. The poem is evocative of images uncannily similar to those of Giclée prints by American Aboriginal artist Renée New Hejazeen, whose inspiration comes from beauty, nature, folk art, and aboriginal dream design.
Is the phrase dream design is alluded to Aboriginal mythology?
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Lake[Lake]
Lake作品集
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来自: Sky Blue Water
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| 发表于: 星期日 十一月 11, 2007 6:47 pm 发表主题: |
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| Like Eric, I too like the second stanza. The first stanza shows a vivid, peculiar picture, but the second is sublime. |
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非马[FFFFFF]
非马作品集
二品总督
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| 发表于: 星期日 十一月 11, 2007 9:31 pm 发表主题: |
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| Thank you all. Eric, I am really amazed you are so well read. |
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Champagne[Champagne]
Champagne作品集
四品府丞
（封疆大吏也！）
注册时间: 2007-09-15
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来自: Nowhere & Everywhere
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| 发表于: 星期三 十一月 14, 2007 11:50 am 发表主题: |
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A beautiful dream design is waiting
waiting for the call of the first star
to soar
into the evening sky
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A poetic piece of Dream Design out of the Dreamtime.
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I like the English version of your poem, especially the second stanza. The poem is evocative of images uncannily similar to those of Giclée prints by American Aboriginal artist Renée New Hejazeen, whose inspiration comes from beauty, nature, folk art, and aboriginal dream design.
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FYI, you can view the online art gallery of acrylic/gouache artist Renee New Hejazeen at http://www.rnharts.com/wildlife.php.
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