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It’s All about Maple (revised)

 
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二品总督
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帖子发表于: 星期三 九月 26, 2007 2:41 pm    发表主题: It’s All about Maple (revised) 引用并回复

It’s All about Maple


The Maple Seal

You are one of the countless fallen maple leaves,
As red as a bloodstain.
You are the sorrow sealed in the heart of an outsider
Wandering along the sidewalk
And blaming the autumn wind.


A Wind-Driven Maple Leaf

Today, here in Ajax, is cold, cloudy, and windy.

I sit in front of my desk, looking out the window. I see something floating along the sidewalk near my house. It is a palm-sized, dry maple leaf.

Sometimes the wind carries it in a circle around the maple tree in my front lawn. At one moment, the fierce wind whips it about so violently, without any warning, sends it soaring skyward, and then lets it fall helplessly down to the ground. It is like a re-enacted scene of the human fall from grace.

I sit quietly, doing nothing. The wind blows again and the dry leaf is carried away.


Moving in the Wind

On an autumn afternoon, Eric and Chan walked by a big maple tree. Eric looked at some branches of it moving in the wind, and asked, "Chan, is it the branches that are moving, or the wind?" Without even looking to where Eric was pointing, Chan smiled and said, "That which is moving is neither the branches nor the wind, it is your heart and mind."


The Maple Tree in My Garden

All the leaves have fallen
And let go the riches of the season.
A flock of geese fly leisurely by.
We never tire of looking at each other –
The maple tree and I.


At the Gun-Mouth of Time*

Here on the front lawn before sunset
Near the maple tree ripped of its leaves
I do what the immigrants do
What the unemployed do
I cultivate hope at the gun-mouth of time

*This is a rewrite of one of Mahmoud Darwish’s poems that are known for telling Palestinian stories with sorrow, pain, and hope and that are a tribute to the Palestinian struggle and resistance.
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Time is nothing but a disquiet of the soul


最后进行编辑的是 ericcoliu on 星期四 十月 11, 2007 8:35 pm, 总计第 2 次编辑
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二品总督
(刚入二品,小心做人)
二品总督<BR>(刚入二品,小心做人)


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帖子发表于: 星期三 九月 26, 2007 8:54 pm    发表主题: 引用并回复

Below is a maple poem, which cheers me up.

The Maple by Bob Hicok

The Maple

is a system of posture for wood.
A way of not falling down
for twigs that happens
to benefit birds. I don't know.
I'm staring at a tree,
at yellow leaves
threshed by wind and want you
reading this to be staring
at the same tree. I could
cut it down and laminate it
or ask you to live with me
on the stairs with the window
keeping an eye on the maple
but I think your real life
would miss you.
The story
here is that all morning
I've thought of the statement
that art is about loneliness
while watching golden leaves
become unhinged.

By ones or in bunches
they tumble and hang
for a moment like a dress
in the dryer.
At the laundromat
you've seen the arms
thrown out to catch the shirt
flying the other way.
Just as you've stood
at the bottom of a gray sky
in a pile of leaves
trying to lick them
back into place.
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Time is nothing but a disquiet of the soul
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帖子发表于: 星期三 九月 26, 2007 8:56 pm    发表主题: 引用并回复

We never tire of looking at each other –
The maple tree and I.


---让我想起了..坐看敬亭山(李白)

众鸟高飞尽,

孤云独去闲。

相看两不厌,

只有敬亭山。
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《爱的灯塔-星子安娜双语诗选》
<Nightlights> <Seven Nights with the Chinese Zodiac> ...

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二品总督
(刚入二品,小心做人)
二品总督<BR>(刚入二品,小心做人)


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帖子发表于: 星期四 九月 27, 2007 8:45 am    发表主题: 引用并回复

You have a particularly sharp eye for reading of my poem.

For a person who is non-English speaking and daring to write in English, he should be shameless and proud to be a nomad, who pays no attention the laws of literary property.

You are a nomad,
Disobeying all the laws of property.
You wander across different lands
Belonging to someone else.
You poach your way across field
Pilfering the wealths of Greece and China.
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(封疆大吏也!)
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帖子发表于: 星期四 九月 27, 2007 11:41 am    发表主题: 引用并回复

In A Journal Entry, October 22, 2003, accessed at http://coviews.com/viewtopic.php?t=30745

ericcoliu 写到:

Sometimes, I wonder whether it is possible in middle age to reinvent oneself radically. Can I control resentment and regrets, master a new language, and express my thought and affection fully in a borrowed tongue? If I cannot, I will gradually lose who I was as well as become uncertain and insecure about who I am and what I am going to do for the rest of my life. Since my arrival in Canada, I have done nothing important, but go ahead with life moment by moment and hour by hour – cleaning the house, preparing meals, and going out for grocery shopping. If I cannot achieve anything, at least I try and create some order and sanity around me.

Does anything in nature despair except man? A wounded animal with a foot caught in a trap does not seem to despair. It is too busy trying to survive. It is closed in on itself, to a kind of still, intense, and seemingly endless waiting. Is this a key? Keep busy with survival?

I’m alone sitting at the desk and immersed in my despair; meanwhile the world goes on. The world does not seem to care about my despair. It does not matter how depressed I am, and nature continues with both inanimate and animate forms in their cyclical occurrences. The sun is moving across the landscape, over the maple tree. At this moment, perhaps, the maple lends itself to my imagination as if inviting me to imitate it. Learn to lose in order to recover, and nothing stays the same for long, not even pain. Sit it out. Let it all pass. Let the maple tree: teach me to care and not to care; teach me to sit still.


The maple tree in your front lawn really teaches you to care and not to care, and it also teaches you to nurture hope at the gun-mouth of time.
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Bottled poetry with sparkling joy.
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